Before anything else, I would just like to remind everyone again that I'm no professional critic. Everything you will be reading from this point onward is based on my own opinions and acquired knowledge in this field. Also, I hope we can still be friends after this. Trabaho lang po. Char ('∀｀）
Title: Tears of Love Genre: Teen Fiction Author: itsmeyouryan No. of Story Parts: 53 Status: Completed
Rating: ◊
R E V I E W S
Title
Your title was fine, though hindi siya masyadong catchy for me. You don't have to change it, though. Okay naman na siya as it is. It's just that masyadong pang-romance ang dating niya sa akin, sa halip na teen fic. Bagay siya kung romance ang genre mo.
Book Cover
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Honestly, medyo dull and empty para sa akin ang cover mo. Maybe it's because faceless ang characters/figures na ginamit? Or maybe it's the font? Nakita ko 'yong chapter na may mga book covers ng story mo, and I saw some that were better than your current cover. Here are my top picks:
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This one is simple yet eye-catching. That's what my sister said (pinapili ko rin siya hakhak), and I agree with her. I like the font and the colors used here. But the characters look too formal, making it seem like a romance story even more rather than teen fic. Also, medyo contrasting siya sa title. Masyadong light kasi 'yong vibes nito at pareho pa silang nakangiti—samantalang kabaliktaran naman ang ipinapahiwatig ng title mo. Pero nagustuhan ko pa rin siya. Very pleasing to the eyes.
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