Jeje Critiques

JEJE CRTQS

WELCOME!

Come in, come in  ꒡ꆚ꒡

Want some coffee? Tea? Or me? ༼☯‿☯༽

Charot, ang luma HAHAHA

Kidding aside, hi! Welcome to my critique shop.

For starters, I am not—I repeat, NOT a professional critic. But I do know the basics and am quite knowledgeable, if I say so myself. However, if you're looking for a perfect and professional critic, I say go find 'em somewhere else.

Now, for those who trust me and are also willing to entrust their works to me... COME HERE AND GIVE ME A HUG (a five-meters apart hug)
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But here are some things you need to remember, which might actually make you want to change your mind ('・ω・｀) :

- I only accept Tagalog and Taglish stories. Hindi lang halata, pero mas bihasa po talaga ako sa Filipino. I'm actually still working on my English skills myself, so I don't think I'd be of much help sa English story niyo.

- I accept all genre, EXCEPT Erotica and anything else with Mature Content. Ghad, 'di ko expertise 'yan. I can handle mature scenes, but I don't know how to write one myself so hindi ko talaga kayo matutulungan. Syempre, if you want to critique, then you should at least know something about what you're supposed to critique, right?

- Your story should have at least 5 chapters, excluding the author's note and prologue. Kung one-shot, malamang isang chapter, ano ba. Char.

- 1 story per author only. Meaning, isa lang sa mga works mo ang puwede mong ipa-critique. Isa lang naman ang writing style natin kaya kung ano man ang mga i-correct ko sa story na ipapasa mo, you can apply it to your other stories as well. G?

- I would be very straight forward and blunt with my reviews. I won't sugar-coat anything. Sorry na lang in advance kung masaktan ko ang damdamin niyo. This is the main reason I made another account. Ayokong magpa-critique ang friends ko sa 'kin, natatakot akong saktan ang feelings nila. Baka mamaya makipag-F.O pa sila sa 'kin. At least dito, anonymous ako HAHAHA. But seriously, though. Coming to a critique shop, dapat handa ka nang makatanggap ng komento, masama man o mabuti. It's what you came here for, after all. It's your masterpiece, natural lang na masaktan ka kung may mag sabing ang pangit ng pinaghirapan mo. But instead of taking it negatively, you should use it to further improve your art. And besides, hindi lang naman puro komento ang ibibigay ko. Magbibigay rin ako ng advice at examples na maaari ninyong gamitin para mas lalo ninyong mapaganda ang inyong akda.

- BE KIND AND UTTERLY PATIENT. Siyempre, may pasok na. Hindi ako makakatutok dito 24/7. Hindi rin madaling mag-critique lalo na kung marami pang sunod na babasahin kaya antay-antay lang tayo mga rEpA pEepS. It would take at least 3-5 days before I post my critiques here, depende sa school works and dami ng magpapa-critique. Also, huwag niyo sana akong pagmu-murahin pagkatapos kong magbigay ng critique sa story niyo. If you find my reviews and opinions offensive, we can settle things up in a calm and orderly fashion. OKS BA 2LL? (༎ຶꈊ༎ຶ╬ )

That's all... for now.

Changed your mind yet? If not, continue reading the next page for more info!