Before anything else, I would just like to remind everyone again that I'm no professional critic. Everything you will be reading from this point onward is based on my own opinions and acquired knowledge in this field. Also, I hope we can still be friends after this. Trabaho lang po. Char ('∀｀）
Title: Zargon Campuses: The Beginning of Escapade Author: YourstrulyEs Genre: Fiction, Adventure, Fantasy No. of Story Parts: 21 Status: On-going
Rating: ◊ ◊ ◊
R E V I E W S
Title:
The title is okay.Hindi lang ako sure sa "The beggining of escapade".It sounds a bit off. Maybe escapade isn't the right term. However, if you insist on keeping it, I suggest you add "an" before the word escapade.
So it basically becomes "Zargon Campuses: The Beggining of an Escapade".
Book Cover:
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I like the cover (especially since it's brown). Nowadays, mas patok na sa masa ang mga modern/aesthetic book covers. Parang hindi na masyadong sikat ang mga covers na may anime characters o Kpop idols ngayon—jeje na ang dating kadalasan. Despite that, though, your cover is surprisingly good. Hindi masakit sa mata gaya ng iba. Kudos to the one who made this for you. Mas maganda lang siguro kung medyo in-adjust 'yong font sizes. And with your book title, I think it would be fitting if building or establishment na nagre-represent sa Zargon Campuses ang ni-request mong gamitin sa cover. But it's actually already good as it is. Hindi mo na kailangang palitan kung ayaw mo :>
Synopsis/Story Description:
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This, along with the book cover, plays a big part in attracting readers. Ito ang unang nakikita nila at ito rin ang madalas nilang pinagba-basehan kung babasahin ba nila ang libro mo o hindi. As for your synopsis, I think it needs slight improvement. If you use the right words, I really think na magiging mabenta siya.
