Hey guys!
I know the past two chapters were long as hell. I've been getting into the zone when it comes to writing this story. I was writing an average of like 1200 words per chapter, but these last two we well above 3000. Will all future chapters pass that 3000 word count? Maybe. I know for a fact that key chapters such as chapters 8 & 9 will be above 3000. I haven't written chapter 10 or 11 yet which will be more light-hearted chapters, so I don't know if chapters like those will be above 3000. I won't make any chapter longer than 4000, but I can't make any promises.
I also know those two were very emotional scenes and they happened back to back. So expect the next few chapters to be more fun world-building. This will include getting more page-time with the AOT main cast since the only one who truly had lines was Sasha. So expect more of them and even possibly a side-story or two.
Some little notes that you may have been thinking while reading
- I do think Mikasa and Eren's bond grew pretty quickly consider at this point it has been only two weeks since they first met. I tried clearing it up in the last 2 chapters or at least give the illusion that it was longer. I'd like to give more time to make it more realistic, but I was kinda restrained by the circumstance I created, aka Eren's "lost voice." If something better comes to mind, then I'll begin a rewrite.
- The news of Mikasa being cut from her job was admittedly a little rushed and "necessary" to move the plot along. I may add some scenes in the chapters that revolve around Mikasa's job and give it a more satisfying feeling rather than it coming out of nowhere. It also allows me to build on Annie and possibly AruAni. If something better comes to mind, then I'll begin a rewrite.
- To be clear, Armin's parents did not know Eren was faking losing his voice. It was never mentioned when Mikasa first came to their house. When I was writing chapter 9, I had to look back at whether or not I made Armin's parents aware of Eren faking. So just to clarify, they did not know.
- The scarf in this AU is maroon since it actually is. If I say red then it's a mistake.
At the time of writing this, no one has yet read this book. That won't deter me however. I'm finishing this book, no matter how many views it gets. So if you're reading this, thank you for reading the past 9 chapters and I hope you stay for the rest.
Ofc if you have any questions or comments, feel free to comment down below.
Thank you and stay safe!

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Novela JuvenilA/N: This is my first time ever writing fanfic, let alone on this site. Every comment is so important to help me improve, so if you have one feel free to drop it. Thank you and enjoy Mikasa, 18, is a likable figure at her high-school. Always tries...