Old title: Mafia Stepbrothers
New title: Her Seven Gems
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A young teenage girl lives with her single mom. She was innocent and sensitive. But unfortunately, she din't have any friends nor was she in a relationship with someon...
So, like I wrote previous part, that I was happy. This was the reason:
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I won 3rd Place in Ot7 category ;)
I've gotten full marks in almost all thing. Here:
Tittle: 5/5 Blurb (Description): 5/5 Cover: 4/5 First impression: 20/20 Plot: 20/20 Flow: 10/10 Emotions: 10/10 Grammar: 6.2/10 Characters Development: 10/10 Overall: 4.5/5 Total marks: 94.5/100 Her review: "A really nice pick. This book is literally perfect. Correct the grammatical errors because after changing your book will be one of the best books I have ever read."
So, I'll try to do this now.
I'm going to edit the chapters and publish them. So, don't think I've deleted your comments. Now, you will see the old pattern of it (before it as unpublished) except these two notes and some edits. Enjoy!
Edited on 8 July 2021: Again, I have unpublished the book because this book was written in November 2020 when I was just a starter and only had 20 followers and barely 50 reads in my other books. It was published around December. I didn't know much about writing at that time. Now, I know more about writing and have this book reached around 350K reads. So, I thought it would be best to edit it properly. The scenes will be extended a little, more detailed, and more things.
And this book has also won 3rd third place in Bluepuff Awards, Ot7 category. I lost the batch. The judge of my books also said to edit grammar and vocabulary and that's what I did. The marks were 82 out of 100.
