This poem has a lot of meaning to me. I think of a speacial guy every time i read it.
I actually wrote this while i was taking a walk about 2 years ago. I remembereed it and decided to write it down. Im glad i did.
So tell me your thoughts and PLEASE!!! Vote and comment!!!! Pretty please with ceries on top!!!
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The Girl
The girl that stood atop the world
Then fell to far below
Her body lay in tangled heap
To weak to move at all
The tears she cried
To hot to bear
"my love!!!" she cried, "where could you be!?!"
She lay there crying for what could have been
A day, a week
A month, a year
Until a hand found her own
And pulled her to her feet
The eyes she saw
The deepest brown
So strong, so sure
Almost to good
To be true
His voice resounded in her ear
"my love," he cried, "ive missed you so
Please, come back to me"
His faults forgotten
Mistakes layed waste
The girl was OK again
And that was all that mattered
To both.
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Thanks for reading this! It means tons. I know i dont know you guys, but your oppinion really matters to me. So can you PLEASE vote and leave me a comment telling me wheather you like this or not. Tell me if ypu want more poems or not!!!
Thanks agaon
1missedkiss96
aka SUPER SAM!!
