My little sister wrote this one, then we worked together and made my own versio of her poem. Tell me what you think, and which one you like better. Personally, I like my sisters verion. <3
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Why did it have to be............?
(my version.)
My broken heart
my bleeding soul
for you i cry eturnally
my aching head
my thoughts consume
and burn through me unrightfully
My thoughts of me
My thoughts of you
My thoughts of us
Together.
<3
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(Bri's version)
My broken heart
My bleeding soul
For you ill cry forever
My aching head
My thoughts run through
Of me and you, together.
I miss you. <3
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There you go. Tell me what you think. And if you like mine, or Bri's version better.
DONT FORGET TO VOTE, COMMENT, FAN AND ADD ME TO YOUR LIBRARY! <3
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