OK I dont want any critisism for this poem. It is MEANT to be choppy and out of rhythm. It goes with the concept of the poem itself. And u are meant to make a pause after every single line. To be honest, it takes a LOT of energy for me to read this poem.
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Adressed as "Love"
A feeling
In my heart
Adressed as
Love
Unknown
Non-existing
It is fright
Love does not
Exisst
I do not
Believe
In love
I do not feel
Yet it is
There
I will stay
Unbelieving
Till death
<3 Phillip
