I'd erase my thoughts.

Red

-Before you read-

I have made a few small changes to the first part so you might want to look at that. When I say small I realy do mean small but there quite important!

Thanks, J x

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Tom POV:

I have never ran so fast. I couldnt let Max die. He was my bestfriend. This all felt to real. I had to keep running. It couldnt end this way. I knew it woulf though... All of a sudden I saw a flash of red to the left of me so I jumped thinking it was a flame. I continued running aware that flames were getting closer and closer to me. I jumped over a broken door and I could just make out Max infront of me. I ran faster than I thought I could and managed to grab hold of his hand just as a burning piece of wood fell behind me causing me to fall on top of Max. You could just hear Max whisper 'Tomax forever'. You could tell Max was getting weaker and weaker I needed to get him out of here and quickly. I picked him up and nearly dropped him, he was heavier than he looked. I couldnt leave him though. He looked at me straight into my eyes and I began to feel his breathing slow. "Stay with me Max. I'm not letting you die." I said shouting at him. His eyes began to flicker close and I ran as fast as I could. I looked up and saw a huge burning chunk of wood about to fall infront of Max and I. I knew instantly that if it fell we would be trapped. I was to caught up in thinking about running quickly I didnt realise there was a hole underneath me. My foot got stuck and I saw the red again. It didnt look like a flame. It looked like a person. I tried to get my foot loose but it wouldnt move and I still needed to get Max out. The red flame came nearer and I realised it was a girl. "Help me please!" I shouted and the girl ran towards to Max and myself. As she got to me and Max she looked at my foot, picked up Max and whispered "sorry" then ran out of the burning. I screamed realising I was stuck in the burning building all alone and I was going to die in here. Everything I dreamed off fading away. I let my breathing slow putting up no fight. Atleast I got Max out. That was good right?

-Author note-

Hello again!

Thanks for reading! I personaly love dramatic parts so... yeah you may see a few of them!

I know its short again but I may write another part today maybe tommorrow depending on if we go to school tommorrow because of the snow where I live!

So what do you thinks going to happen?

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Jaimee x