I'd erase my thoughts.

Blood boiled

Jess POV:

It was silent. We had tried to break the door down but it didn't budge. We were all so scared. Not scared for us but for Sara...

Suddenly there was a crash from downstairs and we all looked at each other scared of what was happening downstairs. We then heard a pair of feet come up the stairs... They were quiet but then we heard the door opposite us open and you could just make out a man shouting. That man was Jay.

Jay POV:

We broke down the door in one go and the house was deadly quiet. Too quiet. I thought for a minute Tom had got the wrong house but he was sure this was the right house. On entry to the house there was one room on your left, the kitchen, the stairs infront of you and the living room to the right. We quickly checked to see if the girls and Sara were in the living room or kitchen but they werent I slowly made my way up to the stairs and noticed there was was three doors. One said 'the bathroom' and the others didn't have signs on. I breathed in and open one door and saw what I hadn't prepared myself for. I felt the anger rising up infront of me and I knew I was going to loose control.

Becky POV:

You could tell it was Jay because you could hear the others downstairs. The rest of the boys made there was upstairs and you could hear them talking quietly. Suddenly the door opened and Nathan stood there crying with Siva behind him. Nathan looked at me and picked me up "Its ok, your safe" he said, I looked at him and laughed, he liked to make everything a bit dramatic! I hugged him back and then he wiped his tears and went all serious "Go downstairs. Leave and run. Go back to the hotel"

"They won't let us in Nath'" I told him but he gave me evils.

"Go." he said sternly and we all got up and left. We still didn't know what happened to Sara but we knew the boys wouldn't tell us as they were blocking the door to the other room. As soon as we got out the house we ran and didn't look back. Nathan was sure we would be let into the hotel and we were.

Jay POV:

The girls had gone and I still couldn't believe it. My blood was boiling. How could he do this? And to his own daughter? Had he done this before? I turned to look at Nathan who was laughing in Sara's room I walked out of Sara's dad's room and into hers. I looked where Nathan was standing and there was a photo of Max with the words 'my husband' next to it! "Nice to see she always liked me!" I said laughing. I spotted a notebook on the floor and opened it.

I threw it down and marched into Sara's Dad's room. He had done it before. This wasn't the first time he had hurt her. He would pay.

-Authors note-

Yeah so 2nd part of today!

There may be another part tonight! Please leave feedback!

Jaimee x

p.s If your the girl who was talking about the fanfic today on the bus... I was the girl laughing behind you! You made my day to know that you liked it! hope you enjoy this part! ;)