POV: your a dying squid but I applied feedback

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The burn felt like a fire ranging in my organs, making it hard to breathe. Thump. Thump. Thump. The beat of my heart drummed from within me. the dry leaves dug into my slimy skin. Every nerve in my body screamed at me, a chorus of pain and distress. My tentacles felt numb as they wiggled around frantically grabbing at anything I could reach in a desperate attempt to hoist myself towards water again. I had lost the battle. The sounds of birds and small rustles surrounded me, cloaking me in peace as I felt my body fail. Darkness clouded my vision. My mind was masked with a haze as I slowly passed into eternal darkness.


thank you...

*desperately tries to think up fake name*

...Bethany  

your feedback was very useful!

(I'm so sorry for calling you Bethany if your reading this, it was the first name to come to mind, you deserve a better name but my mind gave up like 4 weeks ago.)

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