Happiness

Good luck/Bad luck

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XXX Jane's pov XXX
A lot of things ran through Janes head. Usually he would figure out a plan. But this time he didn't think, instead he just bursted in. The two people from before looked at him surprised.

"Well hello Jane. What a surprise".

"Tell me where she is" Jane said with no patience left. He hadn't seen Teresa in months. He was not going to wait any longer.

"You know Jane. This is all part of my plan. My father was dumb enough to not kill you when he had the chance. But since my father isn't here, that's now my job" he said with a evil face. God i hated him. With all my heart.

Jane could feel the frying pan in his hand. He had hidden it behind his back. They hadn't seen it yet. He took it from the kitchen since he wasn't armed. He thought it would make a good weapon .

Jared (Red Johns son) walked towards me with a smirked smile.

"Oh, Patrick don't look so sad. Do you never learn". He stood so close to me i could feel his breath. That was when i hit him with my frying pan. He didn't even get to say something before he fell to the ground unconscious. That's what happens when you mess with my family he thought. That made him smile.

Whew, now it was over. Or that wasn't quite right. He looked up and saw the other person that heplhed Jared. She walked closer to me with a gun pointed at my face. I still had the frying pan in my hand. Ready to hit her.

"Lay down the frying pan and no one will get hurt". The woman looked very serious so i did what she said. She was now so close to me that i could feel the gun to my head.

"One move and you 'll regret it".

I tried to stay clam. That was until i had to sneeze. I couldn't hold it back.

"Atjuhhh".

"What did i tell you. Don't move. You're a dead man Patrick Jane".

I could see her finger on the trigger. Ready to end my life".

One second felt like hours. I was so scared right now. I had been so dumb to just walk in here without a plan.

"Stop, freeze". Someone said and came bursting in.

I was so happy. Without even lookin i knew. It was Abbott and the team.

"Put the gun down and put your hands in the air" Abbott yelled.

Jane knew he cared about Lisbon and was really angry about this. He appreciated that about him. Abbott walked with his gun pointed at Jared. Now standing behind him while handcuffing him.

"You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law".

I didn't hear more. I walked or actually i ran to the pressure tank without any knowledge on how to get them out of it. There was so many red and green buttons. I pressed on a few and nofthing happened. I kept looking for the right button. Then my eyes found a big red button. I was afraid to press it.

I stood like that for a while. If i pressed the button it could mean that it would open the pressure tank. Or it could mean that it maybe would let all the air out. So either good luck or bad luck...what should he do.

So this chapter wasn't that long. Sorry if it was a bit rushed but I hope you still like it. The only way to know that is if you vote and comment. Thanks. Let me now what you think...