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Im loosing my mind at this

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Im loosing my mind at this. Also I'm really happy to hear yall are loving this book cause I was a bit worried.

And I am gonna rewrite chapter 4 to Junos request like I promised. But it might be tomorrow when It comes out as it might be 3k words 😀

I think some parts might have too much talking in it though. But it'll be completely different.

I won't delete the chapter I'll just rewrite it and post the old version here so that if you choose too you can still go back and read it :)
It was copied and pasted so the words and paragraphs might be a but messy. 🎷🐝

Old version ⬇️

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Huggy hit the path hard, slowly starting to slide of to the abyss below.

You could reach out. Move and grab his arm, you wanted to. But what would the consequences be? His weight pulling the both of you off? You drag him onto the path and your stuck running from him again?

You looked over at Izzy and Juno who had flung themselves against the barrier furthest from you. They had no emotion on their faces, just a cold distant look.

You made your mind up. You couldn't let him die no, you couldn't do that if he was truly living; a living breathing being then he did not deserve to die.

He slid off the edge just as you reached him, you shooted the grab pack hands at him, they caught him but not without him hitting his head of off three different things.

You winced at the thought.

Slowly you felt yourself tugging forward as the weight started dragging you too off the edge. You dug your heels into the ground trying to regain your balance but it was no use. You weren't letting go and if it meant the death of both of both of you? Then so be it.

You would not let this creature die. You needed to know how it existed. Was there more of his kind?

Your body reached the edge pulling you forward off the barrier, desperate hands grabbed your shoulders and waist pulling you back with them.

Juno and Izzy had jumped from their spot and came to rescue you.

' y/n let go! '

' that thing tried to kill us! '

They shouted and pleaded for you to let him go, for you to let him fall into the abyss but you couldn't. Your mind screamed and begged you louder to not let him go.

You felt as though your body was dropped, waking from whatever trance consumed your mind.

You had fell onto the path Izzy and Juno lying underneath you, your back lying atop them.

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