This is just a short chapter so don't expect much
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Tommy's point of view*
I call dad to ask him something crucial. My friends asked me if I failed it but I don't remember if this counted
Who he answered I put the speaker on so that everyone can bear the conversation
"Hey, dad, I need to ask you something important" "Okay?" Why does he sound like that. I'm not suspicious so he shouldn't sound like he thinks that he'll be murdered
"Would I fail no nut November if I kicked my friend there" "...YOU WHAT!?" He yelled which hurt my ears
"Oh yeah, he kicked me there because he thought I was a stranger who came into his house" Bilzo said but then Ranboo got into it as well
"Wait, why does he get special treatment! You never let me come to your house! The last time I asked I got punched in the arm!" I snapped back immediately "I thought you said that I was weak"
"Phil.....can I murder him?" He sighs and says "No. We all know that he will somehow find a way to haunt all of our asses and I don't want that to happen" "DAD, YOU BASTARD"
He quickly responds with "Shit. I forgot that you can still haunt me in real life" and then hangs up
I throw my phone to a pillow and huff while folding my arms "Just shut the fuck up" I say to everyone and fall asleep
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I hate how many times the word "And" and "Then" were used. Too much repetition.
I hope you are having a great day or night, good bye!
Number of words: 280
Edit (11/29/22): I was rereading chapters and now I feel so self conscious of my writing. My face was basically the shocked Pikachu face.
It wasn't a reader who commented them made me feel bad, no, it was myself. I thought this chapter was decent, and then here comes me putting a comment saying "I hate how many times the word "And" and "Then" were used. Too much repetition."
It only hurts because it was myself. I didn't realize how bad it was? Are all my chapters that bad? The old ones, definitely. I've improved so much. I feel so sad though :'(
YOU ARE READING
Tommyinnit Angst/Fluff one shots
FanfictionThis is just one shots that I think I don't know these all have angst in them unless I say it doesn't Started: August 26, 2021 Last updated: January 10, 2023 Ended: No one knows Also everything here is platonic unless I say otherwise. And with the m...
