To my current and past readers, as you can plainly tell, I am editing this work. It won't be anything major but I would appreciate some help on this matter. Since I am the writer i have a very biases opinion that everything included helps towards 'character and story build'. But I am aware that this work is a bit lengthy and at times, slow and hard to read through.
This is where you all come in, I would like to know which chapters I could combine, which I should cut down and which should just be taken out all together.
Every opinion matters here to me. I will, of course, ultimately decide what stays what and what goes through revision and already have a few things underway, but I would like to hear a reader's opinion on the matter.
So just leave a comment with your suggestions!
Much appreciated and I hope the new readers enjoy this book as well as the second!
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We Three Mages (Editing)
AdventureTrajare and Demintrea, two of the countries that reside in Magistrax, are the worst of enemies. The other three countries, Cooronolia, Lumstra, and Eestri can feel the wind of change just beyond the horizon. Jared, Mari, and Nadia; students at Traj...
