After lunch I lead the imitates to a new room. A room where they will be ranked. It's a large room, but not in the best condition. The floor is made of old, falling apart wood. The left wall holds a chalkboard used to rank the initates and record their progress. The only form of decoration is a white circle painted in the middle of the floor. There are also punching bags along another end of the room.
On the chalkboard I have already written everybody's name is alphabetical order. Everybody lines up behind the punching bags.
"As I sais this morning, next you will learn how to fight. The purpose of this is to prepare you to act; to prepare your body to respond to threats and challenges- which you well need, if you intend to survive life as Dauntless. We will go over technique today, and tomorrow you will start to fight each other, so I recommend you pay attention.Those who don't learn fast will get hurt." I say.
I show some punches and then observe the initates trying to copy me.
Edward- probably by far the best; has all of the techniques correctly
Peter- looks insane; looks as if he wants to kill everyone. Is only mediocre, though.
Molly- a female version of Peter. I heard her nickname is "The Tank". Suits her, not in a good way
Drew- A less powerful version of Peter who is just try to impress everyone
Christina- she is doing pretty good
Al- Eh, okay, I guess
Will- amateur
Myra- is doing absolutely terrible. My guess is that she's going to be the first person to get killed/ kicked out of Dauntless
Tris- is doing better then she was at first. I need to stop starting at her, this isn't good.
I walk over to Tris and realize she needs more tension in her stomach to through a better punch. She also isn't the strongest but she looks liked she'd make a fast runner.
"You don't have much muscle which means you're better off usuing your knees and elbows." I say.
I press my hands to her stomach and suddenly feel electricity run through me.
" keep tension here." I add.
I lift my hand and start to walk away. She waits a few seconds before starting to fight again, as if catching her breath.
Did that have the same effect on her? Of course not.
" I'm surprised he didnt break you in half. He scares the hell out of me. It's that quiet voice he uses. " I hear Christina say to Trsi.
I leave the room beforing hearinf Tris' responce. I wonder what she said. Do I scare her?
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Divergent- Four's Pov
FanfictionHave you ever wondered what Divergent would be like if told by the character of Tobias Eaton? What would be his views of the Dauntless initiation? What would he think about Tris, about society? This story is the first novel of the Divergent series w...
