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Moth

Name: Mammoth

Nicknames/Titles: General Mammoth, General, Moth Oh Moth is such a cute nickname??

Age: 28 in dragon years

Gender: Female

Pronouns: She/her

Species: Ice/MudWing

Apearance: She has russet brown scales and a slush colored underbelly. Her eyes are pine green, and her wing membranes are dark brown. Her spikes are lighter reddish brown. She has a very large build, but she resembles an Icewing more than a MudWing in body shape. Her tail is thick like a MudWing's, and she has sharp claws. She's a giant compared to other dragons. Oh cool!! Does she have any scars from battles?

Skills: Skilled in claw to claw combat, good at aiming her fire, and can weild a spear fairly well. She also has ok stamina and she is very strong (she can easily crack open a boulder with one or two good whacks). Nice! I'm curious about what strengths and weaknesses she has as a hybrid – is her fire weaker, since she's part IceWing? Can she survive in colder temperatures for longer?

Weaknesses: She's rather slow and can't fly very long. She is also near sighted. Echoing what I said above – does she have any weaknesses because of being a hybrid?

Personality: Moth tries her best to be as kind and loving to those around her, even if she thinks they don't deserve it. She is afraid of letting others down, and is a natural rule follower. She hates sudden changes in plans, since communication is very important to her. She's very curious about the world, though she tends to be a bit cautious all the same. She's quite affectionate with the ones she knows and loves, but she does try to keep boundaries if she knows other dragons don't love being hugged out of the blue. Already really interested to see how this meshes with her being a general, especially the part about her trying to be kind and loving to everyone around her. I imagine there's a lot of internal conflict between that and her desire to follow rules/not let people down

She often has to think outside the box and improvise since she has a bad habit of leaving something till the last minute. She doesn't like being alone for long periods of time, and can be a little clingy. She can be a bit of a show off if she actually knows what she's doing, though she doesn't mind a healthy dose of humiliation every now and again. She does have a hard time opening up to others (mostly because she can be too nervous to actually walk up and start a conversation), and is surprisingly very spiteful. She tries not to show this trait much though, as she doesn't like feeling guilty if she hurts someone's feelings. However, if she's really ticked off, she gets into the mindset of 'if I'm suffering, I'm taking everyone else down with me.' It's a big problem for her because it majorly impacts her want to work with others if she's in this state of mind. You mentioned communication was important to her – does she feel bad about suddenly springing improvised plans on others? I really like her personality so far – she has quite a few traits I haven't seen often in characters (being a showoff but not minding being humiliated and being clingy and kind but spiteful sometimes)

Fears: letting other dragons down, dying on the battlefield. Oh no, that's gotta be difficult on her :(

Motives: she wants to help end the war in whatever way she can, even if it means going onto the battlefield herself. Oh interesting!! Does she feel guilty about fighting/killing other dragons, or does she justify it to herself somehow?

Backstory:

Her backstory is still a wip, but I'll share what I have so far. Also, it's kind of a mini au? The only thing that changed was that I added school and the training camp. Nothing else concerning the plot really changes. Also sorry if some things in the actual age timeline are off, it's been a while since I've read the books. It's also been a while since I've read the books, so if you got something wrong, I probably won't catch it-