OC Reviews (but by a jaded ex-wattpad kid)

Oliver Brooke

°•*:-. name ☆ oliver brooke (two names, no last name) Oh I like this name!!

°•*:-. nicknames/titles ☆

.°•.* proxy of warfare and order ☆ official title

.°•.* brooke ☆ used by close friends and his lover

.°•.* brookelynn ☆ used by his creator, though no one knows why

°•*:-. age ☆ about a few centuries older than when the realm he now resides in was created

°•*:-. species ☆

.°•.* star ☆ stars in this universe are small, fairy-like creatures who go through the usual star cycle of dying when they're old enough. their skin is dark as night and their hairs and clothes are a pure white, giving the sky the illusion of having more stars than there really is !! Oh that's really cool!

.°•.* proxy ☆ proxies are stars that have been chosen by a god to act as their servants. it's a highly-coveted job because the pros outweigh the cons. Oh?? I'm excited to hear more about this

°•*:-. appearance ☆ as a proxy, his appearance is able to be shaped and changed according to their god's will, labeling the patron god as their 'creator' for giving them a new life in a sense. despite this, the gods all decided to keep the proxies' color palettes similar to when they were a star.

oliver brooke is no different. his skin is still as dark and his hair still white as snow like when he was a star, but now it's a little longer, with the front styled to fall messily over one eye and the back reaching his nape. his creator also gave him constellations to serve as his freckles and sized him up to stand at 7'3. his eyes are downturned with long, white eyelashes, full, gold lips, and a white beauty mark just under his right eye. outside of a proxy's uniform, he likes wearing skintight, sleeveless turtlenecks in gold and baggy white pants with the waist falling to rest at his hips. there are slits in the sides of the pants so you can see his muscled thighs and the beginnings of his heeled boots. he also likes painting his nails white like the other proxies, he was given no eyes, simply an all-white cornea with gold makeup along the outside in all sorts of swirly patterns, making it resemble the shape of a mask.

there is also a gold and marble headpiece he often even outside of his uniform that resembles half the sun and it's rays, except the rays were shaped to look like leaf branches with white chains dangling from them. he even wears matching gold dangly clip-on earrings (proxies aren't allowed to have piercings). Their design sounds really cool!! He seems like he'd be fun to draw

°•*:-. gender ☆ nonbinary (amab)

°•*:-. pronouns ☆ he/they

°•*:-. personality ☆

.°•.* loyal ☆ that's the first thing anyone who has met oliver brooke would have to say about him. he's fiercely loyal to his patron god, often standing by their side in and out the pantheon, even often going to visit them when on their break. it's soured his friendships and relationship prospects with how willing he is to leave them when he hears his patron god needs him, but it's not something he ever thought to care about until he was sent to the realm below. nowadays, he works hard to equally divide his loyalty, especially now that he has a family to look after. I like that he's working on balancing this and outside relationships – it seems like an interesting trait to explore!!

.°•.* sympathetic ☆ it's cliché, yes, but aside from his fierce loyalty, it's the second-most said trait about him. as quick as he was to blow things off with his friends in favor of serving his patron goddess, he still eagerly lends a helping hand to those he meets along the way unless the matter he was called for is urgent. he takes the time to listen to people and offer comfort or advice when asked. it's actually the main reason why his relationships soured, but never diminished. Oh nice!! I like the conflict here between this and their loyalty – again, something that seems interesting