Hey y'all, I just wanna say that now that this story is over I'm so glad and blessed to go through this journal with y'all, special thanks to Broadway_Crackers iwantaferret_ , not only did they support me, but they became close friends, commented on every chapter, and encouraged me with positivity and understanding. I don't think I would've finished this book without them. Which is a big deal because I'm SO proud of this book, I'm proud of the hard work I put into it, I'm proud of the months I spent, and I'm proud of the quality I upheld myself to. It's sad it has to end but I've already allowed much too long of a falling action lol. Hopefully I'll also finish my next book, if not, I get it a great go. I'm just proud of this one and knowing that I CAN write a book if I want to. Thank you for all my wonderful readers, enjoy the planning.This book is a 4 hour and 27 minute read
Which based on my calculations (please correct me if I'm wrong) is 80,100 words long.
I can't physically believe that, that's insane, I'm so fricken proud of myself. It's a good book omg I'm just overjoyed.
I started this in MAY. Wow.
So yeah... it's over. But I thought I'd leave with the plan, a little bang.
So just... thank you.
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Okay ashley groundwork do it right do it now
-NOTES-
-Race's POV should be poetic and beautiful, he's lived his life basically alone, talking to himself. His inner talk is strong and entertaining for lack of other interactions, also from his constant exposer to adults (dangerous ones as well) he's a maturity that tries to hold on to his younger years, also kinda ADHD.
-Jack's POV should be simpler to contrast Race's so my readers actually fricken NOTICE dammit. Like a normal human thought. He's total eye candy though, USE THAT.
-Race loves his dad unconditionally, no matter how much abuse he's exposed to this does not change, and will not change.
-Race's memory of his mom should be a ghost fond, he knows he loves her, but he can't remember why.
-Race's dad likes Race, but he doesn't love him. Not like a father should. That's the difference between him and other parents, Race is just a roommate.
-Jack doesn't love Race like how a dad does, he loves him like a Brother. Jack didn't grow up with a dad but he took care of his brother, Race is just another brother
-Medda found Jack in a box on the street at 7, Jack just remembers his parents disinterested at him
-Race is a total twink (we love him though)
-Sprace???? Maybe??????? Lmao If I don't do this and publish my planning my readers will FLIP. But the point isn't to focus on relationships but the person themselves
-Race doesn't fall into school with ease, but his natural personality is likable. He's still awkward and isn't always perfect with his words (okay Ash self insert this one damn time,
JUST THIS ONE TIME)-Race's image of himself is low, but not the low my readers notice unless they Super Scanner Bros 2.0 (I probably will be too obvious about it though or forget lol) oh yeah I forgot, note read this more.
-use fullivian like common ashley you came up with this awesome character and you're NOT gonna use it constantly? Rookie move (also Ferret loves them)
-ADD MORE POKER SCENES, for Broadway Crackers of course. Making her way downtown the fandoms and stumbling on my book.
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