Miraculous Ladybug Season 3: The Beginning to a Better World

Party Crasher(rewrite)

(So, one of the major issues with the episodes, apart from the cringe and another thing, is the fact we see Viperion and Pegasus before their official episodes(in the actual episode, Cat Noir called them by their hero name. Go rewatch it to see my point). In any case, I am going to rewrite mostly that scene, as well as a few scenes that need rewrites. Now, I didn't want to go in depth with this, but I NEED to get the elephant out of the room. I know some people call this episode sexist because of an all guy party, and the scene where Marinette gets in as the biker dude. I am one who doesn't want to talk about this kind of stuff, but I need to clarify this. I am absolutely NOT a sexist IRL. I never want to be a sexist, or intend on being one. I appreciate all genders, and treat them equally with the respect they deserve. I don't want people to believe that just because I am not going to change the premise of Adrien's guy party, that I am a sexist. So please, understand me when I am saying that I am NOT a sexist at all. I'm so sorry I had to talk about this, but I don't want any problems at all with these rewrites ok? Now this will work like Miracular, so this won't be that long. Let's go).

Adrien zoom talks with his buddy, Wayem(the fanboy from Gorizilla). He is trying to hang out with him, but his Father won't allow it. He does promise Wayem that once he gets a chance, they will hang out. Wayem is happy that Adrien cares, and hangs up. Moving on, Adrien's friends, Nino, Max, Kim, and Ivan, plan to go into Adrien's house to party since his Dad is away for business. Turns out Gabriel is not away for some reason because he has to serve as the villain for these stories. The guys all made excuses so the girls don't know what they are doing. They also discuss the plan to get inside. With Gabriel "leaving for the airport," Adrien's bodyguard has to watch him. Gabriel is with his dead wife, collecting butterflies with Nooroo. Turns out the girls are planting trees for some program. They all get the messages, and understand why they can't make it. However, Adrien believes this sounds suspicious, so she leaves her friends to investigate(yeah, another moment where Mari is totally obsessed with Adrien). Adrien's friends are outside of his house, and ring the doorbell. Adrien's doorbell cam shows up, and tell the bodyguard they are here to do a school project with Adrien. When that doesn't work, they switch to plan B. They offer action figures to the bodyguard because apparently that is what the guy is interested in. After a few other trades, they successfully get into Adrien's room. When the bodyguard leaves, the boys are so pumped to party. Adrien however, is not happy because he is scared how his father will hear about this. They tell Adrien that everything will be ok because his Dad will never know since he is away for the weekend. Adrien eventually agrees, and the fun(mostly cringe) commences. They check out all of Adrien's video games, his foosball table, his piano, his bathtub(for Kim to swim in), and the fact his computer has access to the house's electricity. That was thanks to Markov. As they get this party started, Marinette tries to text the guys to see what is up. They get her messages, but Nino refuses them to answer. While they enjoy themselves, Marinette arrives at Adrien's house. She sees Marc, Nate, and Jack(he is added in) enter the house. Tikki believes Mari should stop this, but Mari refuses. The guys decide to crank the tunes up, and that results in a massive sound wave that blows Mari back, before she answers the doorbell. This of course leads to a power outage in Gabriel's basement. As the lights go out, Officer Roger arrives because again, obviously. Turns out, he is actually here to party as well, as shown from his impressive foosball skills. Mari goes to get in, but they refuse to let her in. This party's gets more hype, as more people arrive. And I mean more people. This is here my first change comes in, the scene where Mari disguises herself, and gets in. The issue with this scene is the fact it is completely sexist(Again, go rewatch to see my point). Here is what I would do here.

Mari does get the stupid disguise on, and rings the doorbell. The doorbell cam opens up. "Hello there. I heard there was a party, and I want to join in. If that is ok with you that is." Marinette said. The doorbell cam leans in closer to Mari. Mari starts to sweat, and gets nervous. Miraculously, the diquise works, and she gets in. Mari is excited that she is once again breaking into another person's house, and rushes inside(I did say her stalk like behavior will be present, BUT it will be fixed. Trust me). This is where the story continues to stay the same in the actual episode.