Miraculous Menace(original story by me)

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(Now with my final Season 3 rewrite done, the time has come for you to read the FINAL story of my Season 3 fanfic/rewrite.  Once this is done, it is off to Season 4.  I have to say, I am really proud of what I have accomplished here.  Season 3 may not be my best work compared to the other things I have planned, but I am still proud of it.  I think there are two things I am really proud of here.  1. Chloe.  I am happy how I did Chloe's redemption arc here.  It may not be how you hoped it would be, but I am still happy.  And besides, in this story, she is going to shine even more than a shooting star.  2. Essence.  I know I created this guy, but it was a joy to bring him to life.  I had the character in my head for FOUR years, and I have continually been giving him more to his character over time.  These are the two main things I am proud of.  Other things I am happy with are making Marinette a bit better, Master Fu better, give Adrien more of a purpose, and fixing the episodes that have problems.  I am very happy to be doing this, and I am very happy to end this and go onto Season 4.  With all that being said, please enjoy the final chapter in this story).

At Master Fu's house, it is revealed Lila knows that Hawkmoth is Gabriel.  In flashback, after the events of the episode Ladybug, he revealed his secret identity to her.  He did do because he trust her enough to become a member of his villain team.  "I am extremely honored to serve you now, Hawkmoth.  I have been waiting for a moment like this for a long time."  Lila said.  "Indeed.  You have done a phenomenal job with getting rid of those bad influences, that I had to reward you in a way that is very well deserved."  Hawkmoth replied.  "Of course.  It now all makes sense.  You wanted me to do these things, so you can akumatize more people.  It makes sense to why you are Hawkmoth, and it is a pleasure to be working with him face to face."  Lila said in joy.  "It is a pleasure as well for you to work with me.  Now, time for you to finally get what you always wanted.  Destroying Ladybug, and making Adrien all yours."  Hawkmoth replied.  He let's out an akuma, and it goes into Lila's bracelet.  "Miraculous Menace.  I give you the power to wear as many miraculous as you desire, and master all their powers in a second.  This will give you the ability to end those in your way, and help finally stop those pathetic heroes."  Hawkmoth said.  "Thank you, Hawkmoth.  I swear, I will not let you down."  Lila replied as she transforms into Miraculous Menace.  "Now, take all the miraculous, and cause havoc throughout all of Paris.  I have a guardian to tend to."  Hawkmoth ordered as he leaves.  "Fantastic.  Now I can finally get my revenge."  Miraculous Menace replied.  She puts on all the miraculous, and unifies with them all to have max power(Now before I continue, I need to make this clear first.  I bet you already have an issue with the Goat and Rooster powers.  In a nutshell, the goat is a ripoff of Ladybug's power, while the Rooster gives any power you want[OP!!!!!!!].  I will rewrite their powers to be less OP, but they probably won't be revealed until my Penalteam rewrite.  You just need to wait and see).

Back with Ladybug, she is on the ground recovering from her fly.  She is one minute from de-transforming, and needs to hide.  She goes into an alleyway, just in time to transform back.  "Please hurry, Tikki.  We have to make it back to Master Fu.  We can't have Hawkmoth and Mayura take all the miraculous.  We have to get them back."  Marinette said as she panics.  "I am eating as fast as I can, and don't worry, we will get them back.  Master Fu well trained us.  I am positive he can handle them both."  Tikki replied.  "I sure hope so."  Marinette said.  "Ok, I am done.  Let's go."  Tikki replied.  "Tikki, spots on."  Marinette said as she transforms into Ladybug.

Adrien has de-transformed, and is waiting in the park for Kagami.  He called her, and told her that is where they should meet.  Kagami arrives, happy to see Adrien.  "Hey, Kagami.  Are you ok?"  Adrien asked.  "I am fine.  The real question is are you ok?"  Kagami asked back.  "I am alright.  Thankfully, Ladybug and Cat Noir stopped that weird villain."  Adrien replied.  "Yeah.  Anyway, I am just glad to be together again.  As I told you, you are the person I have the most fun with.  Every time we are together, my feelings just bloom like a blossom.  I just.......want to get close with you, that's all."  Kagami said as she tries to go in for a kiss.  As she leans closer, a portal opens up next to them.  Kagami is then punched, and sent flying again a fence.  "Kagami!"  Adrien said as he runs to her.  "Kagami, are you ok?"  Adrien asked.  "Ouch.  I am ok, but what was that?"  Kagami asked back.  "Just Adrien's protector from bad influences."  Miraculous Menace replied.  Adrien and Kagami see Lila, who is wearing all the miraculous inside of the Mother Box(I don't have a design for this villain, so try to think of Monarch ok).  "Lila?!!!"  Adrien and Kagami asked in shock.  "Not quite.  I am not Lila anymore.  I am someone more than that.  What you are witnessing, is a being powered with miraculous.  I.....am......Miraculous.......Menace!!!!!"  Miraculous Menace replied.  "Wait?  You have all the miraculous?  But how?"  Adrien asked in confusion.  "Hawkmoth gave them to me for an extra power up to defeat those losers.  He is currently handling the so called guardian of the miraculous right now."  Miraculous Menace replied.  "WHAT????"  Adrien scream in shock.  "Yep, but first I need to take care of Kagami, so Adrien and I can be together forever."  Miraculous Menacne replied.  "Try me, punk.  Adrien, run."  Kagami ordered as she charges to Miraculous Menace.  Adrien begs her to stop, but she pursuits.  "Pfff, amateur.  Clout."  Miraculous Menace said as she uses the tiger powers.  He then punch's Kagami in the gut, and sends her flying through the streets of Paris.  Adrien is shocked at this.  "No offense, Adrien, but if there is only one way for you to love me, is to get rid of the competition."  Miraculous Menace said, and then leaves.  "Oh my God, I can't let that happen."  Adrien replied.  He gets up, and goes to an alleyway to transform.  "Plagg, claws out."  Adrien said as he transforms into Cat Noir.  Kagami is found on the streets, after being hit with clout.  She tries to get up, but Miraculous Menace arrives fast, and kicks her against a car.  Kagami gets up to fight, but Miraculous Menace doesn't hold any bounds.  She grabs Kagami, and chucks her against a fence.  She then picks her up again, and throws her back against the wall.  Finally, she picks her up again, and slams her to the ground hard.  Kagami is very injured, after that beat down.  "And Adrien says you are a tough friend.  Your just like all the other girls who fond over him.  You think he is so perfect, while I understand his pain.  Not to mention, how selfish you purely are.  I watched how you tired to kiss him.  Disgusting, Kagami.  Disgusting."  Miraculous Menace said.  Kagami struggle to get up.  "I am not selfish.......I love Adrien, and I treat him better than you do.  Unlike you, I don't lie, manipulate, or hurt people to get what I want.  I actually care for Adrien, not take him for myself."  Kagami replied as she struggles with the pain.  "Oh, shut up."  Miraculous Menace said as she press her foot on Kagami's back, and slams her into the ground again.  "Sorry, sweetie, but there can be only one Adrien chooses to be with.  And that is going to be me."  Miraculous Menace said.  She takes out a hammer, the ox's weapon, and goes to use it on Kagami.  Thankfully, Cat Noir uses his staff to hit Miraculous Menace away fro her.  "Sorry, but taking out the girls that like your crush isn't going to make him like you."  Cat Noir said.  "Ahh, Cat Noir.  Glad that you could join in.  I am trilled to take you and Ladybug out once and for all.  With that, she will pay for ruining my chances with Adrien Agreste."  Miraculous Menace replied.  "Unfortunately for you, we are not going to let that happen.  I would love to fight, but I have business to attend to."  Cat Noir said.  He picks up Kagami, and runs away from Miraculous Menace.  "HEY!!!  GET BACK HERE!!!!!  Ugh.  No matter.  She will be easy to take care of later.  Now to dispose of the other threat to Adrien.  Chloe Bourgeois."  Miraculous Menace said as she leaves to find Chloe.

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