I want to settle things first before I continue updating this. There's been a lot of you asking about the POVs. I'm really sorry for being unclear about this. I don't write POVs to maintain the anonymousness of the characters, like for example in Macau's POV before it was revealed that it was him. I use asterisks *** to separate the POVs of each character. Most of the chapters were Porchay's POV, if it's not his POV it'll be by another unnamed person or they did introduce who they were at the beginning of the chapter, for example Kinn and Pete's POV. I just can't write someone's POV because where's the thrill of that unfamiliar point of view, right? I also dropped some hints right after and some of you have figured it out.
Another one, who's talking to who? Most chapters are composed with 2-4 characters talking to each other, almost were of Porchay's with another person. I promise, from now on, I'll try to be more clear about who's talking to who. I apologize.
I wanted to reply with all of your questions from the previous chapters but I'm afraid that I might drop some spoilers. Y'all are quite the detectives, lmao. Some of you guessed it right away.
There's also lots of errors grammatically or whatsoever because I haven't edited this yet, I am still re-reading everything and spotting the errors, feel free to correct me in the comments. I sometimes forget the obvious errors, and thanks to those who pointed it out.
I would also like to take this chance to ask for your suggestions or questions. I will try to cater every question you will ask.
Anyways, thank you for patiently waiting for the updates, I didn't expect that this story would come this far. It's because of you all. I will work harder to satisfy everyone.
Watch out, there'll be a lot of mystery coming so it will be more confusing. We're just starting.
I will be forever grateful to you all and I sincerely apologize.
See you next update, Love you all <3
UPDATE: AS OF JULY 19, 2022
I already edited the POVs, I hope it won't be too confusing. Some POVs will remain with asterisks for anonymous POVs. Please drop your suggestions or concerns. I'm editing this little by little. I'll stop by here for updates. I haven't checked the use of words or grammatical errors, I will be doing that when I have time. Thank You, Love you all <3
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FanfictionIn a world where love can both lift you to the heavens and break you into a million shattered pieces, Porchay's heart hung precariously in the balance. After Kim, the love of his life, abruptly walked away, leaving him dazed and confused, the burnin...
