Here are some scrapped ideas for EACH chapter before I decided not to
Chapter 1 - The Anonymous Radiocast
Jalea's interactions with Dave was not meant to happen, but I needed a way to show the audience Jalea and show how much of a snark he was.
I censored out Nintendo Switch cause I knew how infamous Nintendo is for copyrighting. I'm only a high school student I don't wanna get sued.
The "Anonymous" radiocast is actually from the Operative where Prodigy works, and also Dave as a freelancer, the operative is called Steel Cove, and it's a fictional organization that fights crimes.
Chapter 2 - The Crucial Information
The machine was sabotaged by the auditor, he simply removed some of the parts and took it away, which was why Jam cannot fix it no matter what, because he can't complete something if it's not there, like a puzzle with a few pieces missing.
Chapter 3 - Team Work Makes The Dream Work
The two man that was raiding the facility was quite obvious, they were Sanford and Deimos. Hank wasn't there because he was still at large, and needed help from his friends, that was also the time where the agency set up wanted posters for Sanford, Deimos and Hilde.
Chapter 4 - The Gravel War
This is a Team Fortress 2 reference, based off the two mann brothers fighting over the gravel land, Dave was the spy, Prodigy was the pyro, Jalea was the medic, Zak and Lucas were Demoman and soldier. This is also where I got some of the personality for all of them, pyro not talking much, Zak being into alcohol, the medic being arguably insane and Lucas being a soldier.
Chapter 5 - Help From Above
There were originally going to be more characters in the book, which were the people that Lucas came with, however my unoriginal brain didn't come up with anyone else that could help them, so I killed the "Unknown" characters, they were originally going to be Mochi's brother, Jam's two robotic siblings and Prodigy's Husband (none of the characters are actually dead, they just never showed up)
Chapter 6 - Unexpected Alliance
The communication devices were sabotaged by the auditor, since Jam uses a radiocast that is different than the ones the agents use in Nevada, the auditor was able to notice it's difference in signals and intercept them, forcing it to only broadcast static noises, the three characters, Sanford, Deimos and Hank are all made by Krinkels.
Chapter 7 - The Trap
I said Jebus instead of Jesus because I was afraid I would get slammed by the pope for misuse of a holy figure. I also messed up and forgot to include a new character for the next chapter :P
(Update: RIP pope damn)
Chapter 8 - Counterstrike
The title is a bit stupid but it was the best I can come up with, Hilde saying "I've played enough videogames to know where this is going." Is a reference of two things, the "I've watched enough anime to know where this is going." Meme and a reference to Left 4 dead 2 (Made by valve). The portable Improbility Drive is a even smaller variant of the Improbability Drive that Tricky uses.
Chapter 9 - Peep, The One Above All
One Above All is a skin in Your Bizarre Adventure for a stand called Made In Heaven, also where I got the powers for Peep. It was originally going to be Mochi that activated the device, but it may confuse people on how a ghost was touching real objects, and since Mochi was already confusing enough I didn't want him to be more confusing.
𝓬𝓱ＡｐtＥя １(Ѳ) - t𝓱Ｅ ａŇσŇ𝕪mσ𝕌ş 尺Ａ𝓭𝐢σ𝓬Ａşt
The title is a bit buggy but it translates to ChAptER 1(0) - thE aNoNymoUs RAdiocAst. This is a reference to chapter 1, where everything took place, Peep resetted the universe so that everything went back to the beginning, which is also why it's called the first chapter (but with a 0 added in the end). The chapter was originally going to be called "Chapter 10- The end(for this madness) *ba tum tss* But I didn't because it sounded lame.
This is the official end to this story, thank you to the 180 people(as of 2022/11/09) that have seen this story, this means a lot to me and is the first story I ever published.
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