chapter 5: The Mall

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MAX'S POV:

We ate our eggos and headed out the door. I got on my skateboard and El got on her bike. We rode to the mall "hey max" El says as we both stop "yea?" "What happend between you and Lucas?" She asks out if the blue. "Oh uhm.. I don't really remember" I reply. I did remember but I didn't want to say. "Oh ok!" El says as we start to ride off. "El, how are you and Mike doing?" I ask as we are almost at the mall. "Oh uhm. I haven't talked to him in a few days." She replies getting red. "Oh ok" I say as we arrive at the mall. We get off our bike and skate board and run inside.

We go and try clothes on and have a fashion show:

We go and try clothes on and have a fashion show:

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It was so fun. After the last outfit El needed my help with the back zipper on her outfit, it got stuck I go to her changing room to help her when we I get in I close snd lock the door. She turns around and I un zip it but it unzipped really low. To the bottom of her back, I blushed hard. All of a sudden we hear Mike bang on the door. "EL OPEN UP!" how did he know we were here? El turns and whispers in my ear "get on the seat. He's gonna peak to see if their are any other feet." I get on the seat and put my feet up. Sure enough Mike looks "ELEVEN OPEN THE DAMN DOOR" El speaks up "Mike I'm changing go sit down, I'll be right out." She says trying to seam like i wasn't hear. Mike hurt her everytime I was around. "Fine" he said storming off.

EL'S POV:

Me and Max were in the changing room. She was helping me when Mike starts banging on the door yelling for me to open up. I told him to wait and he stormed off. Me and max couldn't risk him knowing she was here so I had to change infront of her. I got on the ground and didn't see his feet so max went over to a area where Mike couldn't see her when I opened the door. I take the top off and look at max, she quickly looks away "you ok max?" I ask as she is RED "y-yea" she reply. I walk over to her as I still haven't put my shirt back on. I put my hand on her cheek and turn her head, she looks at me and then down. I put my other hand on her other cheek and lift her head.

"Whats wrong max?" I ask. She doesn't say anything "why are you all red?" I was confused" she still didn't respond. I hear Angela and her friends talking "max get on the seat" I whisper into Max's ear. We slowly go over to the seat and there isn't room for me so I have to sit on Max's criss-crossed legs. I lean back onto max and she wraps her arms around me. Once we hear them walk away I jump up take my pants off and get my clothes that I was wearing earlier back on. I look at max, she looks the same as before I walk over "you need to change max" I whisper in her ear. Max nods, I life her head "max talk to me" "later" she whispers looking down. I sneak out of the stall go into the kther grab her stuff and sneak back into mine. I hand her the clothes. "Get dressed" I say pulling her up. She looks down and says "I can't reach the zipper can you help?" The zipper went really low but I didn't care "sure" I go behind her and go to unzip it I unzip it a bit to much and the whole outfit falls down. She catches it though. We both giggle a little and she takes it off and puts her clothes from earlier on. I give her a hug "I need to go distract Mike, run out once I get him into a diffeent changing room" I whisper almost touching her ear with my lips. She gets red and hot "ok" she replies. I go out and get Mike into a stall she runs out and I tell Mike. "We need to talk meet me at the cabin in 1 hour" I say before running off. I meet max outside "cabin hurry" we got on out bike and skate board and hurry off. When we get to the Cabin I tell max what's going on and she listens. More than Mike ever has. She stand up and gives me a hug. "Its ok I'm here if he does anything I'll be hiding in the closet" she whispers into my ear almost touching my ear with her lips. I get red and hot just like she did in the changing room. I hear Mike knock. It's been an hour already? I hide max in the closet. This is it.

A/N: This is the longest and most detailed chapter I've made so far. I'll try and keep them like this. Hope yall like the story. I might post a second one today.

What is El going to tell Mike? ANY ideas?

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