hello everyone, little intermezzo in here, at school I have a very good platonic friend, he's an amazing writer, he writes fantasy and it looks really promising, so he asked me to publish a piece of it, I'll give you a little preview of this, it's in dutch but I'll translate it for you.
chapter one: Miinu
only if I could keep fighting, never back down. but it didn't work, now I'm here, alone. my wrists hang on the stone wall with an iron chain. only now I realized that resisting had bad consequences.
little blood drops fall out of my nose at the filthy floor. only a few days ago, I was at home and now I'm here, captured by the enemy. hopeless I try to jerk to iron plug out of the wall, but my arms and wrists are too weak. in the room there is not much. a wooden crate with two pillows, a toilet that looked like it hadn't been cleaned in a long time. a double bed which only was a wooden shelf. tears flooded from my eyes. How was this possible? I can't believe it. my head sunk down. I jump when the old door creaked open and a young girl entered the room. the foul ward who was a bit corpulent laughed at her. and the door closed.
after a few minutes she looked at me. she looked my age. she looked up at the chain around my wrists. her bright blue orbs looked scared. "why are you chained up?" she asked. "if you resist you get this." I said. from what region she would be. she looks built like a Lomanian, but her looks are Vildesburg. "you are from Varlandia aren't you?" she asked. looking at my dark grey eyes and light brown hair, you could see that. she comes closer and tries to untie the knot. de iron chain loosens and after a few seconds I'm free, my wrist are full with blood. "I'm Miinu." I say to the girl. "Violet, nice to meet you." she raises her hand. the gesture of formal politely makes me think of a higher rank in the society.
so what do you think, that boy from my class is working very hard on it and is willing to fully publish it, if you give him good feedback. so don't forget to vote and comment.
James
