the plot of the story

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I know that it's full of holes. I don't exactly have a storyline to go off of. It's mainly just ideas that come to my head or inspiration with random tidbits of drama, fun, humor etc. The thing is, I was going into writing this blind, as I still don't really know how to tiee everything together even though it's plainly simple im lacking something in my writing and it shows. Which is why I have a request for all of you.

Can you all tell me what to do? Like when i wrote another episode or whatever, maybe leading somewhere or directly message me or call me out in the comments of my mistakes and I'll try to fix it per your instructions.  If you all could do that, i would really appreciate it even if it is the writers job to see and fix mistakes before publishing. Sometimes I don't see what's wrong with my writing and I want to get better at it.

That is why I'm asking this of you for whoever sees my faults at writing point them out in messaging, comment sections etc. Doesn't matter how, or how rude it is, I just want to know your thoughts.

Thank you for tolerating me and my writing and for all the support you've given me as im still growing at a writer.

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