maybe i made limeade - mgc [slow updates]

🍋 ch 11 🍋

three minutes turned into thirty minutes. and then you could doors slamming and voices talking to the doctor.

her room door, almost broke off the hinges. "i tried to stop him avi." cal said, out of breath.

"is she alright?!"

"dad, i'm so sorry, i should have never gone out to the beach." she cried.

"it's not your fault. shhh."

"but it is."

——later

aviana's body was taking a turn for the worst. she was laying in the hospital bed, with a mask over her face to help her breathe. she was losing consciousness. and fast.

michael was right by her, the entire time, watching her stats drop, watching the nurses put their work into her.

the shark that bit her, was poisonous, but the crew at the hospital believed that they could get all the poison out of her.

well, that ship sailed a while ago, because she was falling, nothing was working at this point. crystal was called in, but they were told that she might not make that long. crystal's flight was 20 hours, her estimated time was thirteen out of the twenty.

throughout the night, her body was failing. it was getting harder and harder for her to breathe.

michael left her to get a breather in, when he had to be called back in.

"...am i going to be okay?.."

is the words that michael heard, before all her machines started going off. her breathing was erratic and she was wheezing as she was trying to take another breath in.

her lungs started to give way, and it was trying to get in as many breaths as possible. "you're going to be okay sweet girl, stay with me."

and she succumbed to blackness, and then the flatline was heard.

nothing more.

i'm almost done rewriting this, dw

- ash 🤍🤍