So, apparently, Vespera has no emotions. (Had? I don't know. Her dying kind of came out of the blue, and I usually forget it happened.) That might seem like a pretty good way to build a villain, but I feel like it wasn't explored to its full potential.
If Vespera doesn't feel anything, then why was she so angry at Luzia? I'd love to see that developed on more but it's kind of too late now.
So, does (did) she still feel some emotions? Or did she intellectually decide to get revenge on Luzia without any particular emotional reason?
Also, while we're at it, let's talk about the scene right at the literal end of Stellarlune. Since this is a chapter on Vespera, you probably know what I mean.
When Gisela basically exploded her with the power source.
That was so...random. I still don't see the best motivation for Gisela, but the whole end of Stellarlune was pretty confusing. It cut off in the MIDDLE OF A SCENE! A BATTLE SCENE! WITH A LOT GOING ON! AND YOU EXPECT ME TO REMEMBER THAT CREEPY LADY #2 DIED? APPARENTLY RANDOMLY?
Sorry about the caps lock.
Anyway. That concludes my (very short) presentation on Vespera.
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