Cupid's Charm Awards

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The Best Blurb Category

"Always Faithful"

Finished in 1st place out of 7 competitors.

Finished in 1st place out of 7 competitors

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Scoring and Review by Eloeide:

     Awesome introduction. The narrator in third person gives us a whole and well-rounded vision of the book itself and the story to come. We already know a very important detail about Lyla and we can tell the struggles she's about to affront. Excited for the action! And love the last send-off line, trust no one. Feels like there will be others involved and prepares you to be aware of each character from now on. I really like this. No grammar faults either.

Total Score: (10/10)

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The Fanfiction Genre

"The Mandalorian and the Jedi: Book One of the Mandalorian Series"

Scoring and Review by SakshiYadav591

     Cover: (3/5) - The cover is good but it not that attractive.

     Title: (3/5) - The title matches the story but could be little shorter and more attractive.

     Blurb/Description: (4.5/5) - The description is really good and it gives a sense of mystery to the story.

     Writing Style: (5/5) - Writing Style is really good and perfectly matches the story.

     Story phase: (4.5/5) - The story phase is neither too short nor too long.

     Grammer and Vocabulary: (9/10) - The grammer and vocabulary is great.

     Plot: (2/5) - There is not much plot in the story.

     Emotional Impact: (3/10) - The story is not emotional at all.

     Readers Engagement: (8/10) - The story is great, though at first it might seem boring.

     Overall Enjoyment: (16/20) - The story is great but I think it can have some great plot twists.

Total Score: (58/80)

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