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The Best Blurb Category
"Always Faithful"
Finished in 1st place out of 7 competitors.
Scoring and Review by Eloeide:
Awesome introduction. The narrator in third person gives us a whole and well-rounded vision of the book itself and the story to come. We already know a very important detail about Lyla and we can tell the struggles she's about to affront. Excited for the action! And love the last send-off line, trust no one. Feels like there will be others involved and prepares you to be aware of each character from now on. I really like this. No grammar faults either.
Total Score: (10/10)
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The Fanfiction Genre
"The Mandalorian and the Jedi: Book One of the Mandalorian Series"
Scoring and Review by SakshiYadav591
Cover: (3/5) - The cover is good but it not that attractive.
Title: (3/5) - The title matches the story but could be little shorter and more attractive.
Blurb/Description: (4.5/5) - The description is really good and it gives a sense of mystery to the story.
Writing Style: (5/5) - Writing Style is really good and perfectly matches the story.
Story phase: (4.5/5) - The story phase is neither too short nor too long.
Grammer and Vocabulary: (9/10) - The grammer and vocabulary is great.
Plot: (2/5) - There is not much plot in the story.
Emotional Impact: (3/10) - The story is not emotional at all.
Readers Engagement: (8/10) - The story is great, though at first it might seem boring.
Overall Enjoyment: (16/20) - The story is great but I think it can have some great plot twists.
Total Score: (58/80)
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An Author's Portfolio
Non-FictionInside this portfolio, you will find the results from competitions I have entered my stories into, whether those results are awards my books have won, reviews given by my fellow authors and hosts, or honorable mentions. Ten Highest Rankings: #226 in...