Inside this portfolio, you will find the results from competitions I have entered my stories into, whether those results are awards my books have won, reviews given by my fellow authors and hosts, or honorable mentions.
Awesome introduction. The narrator in third person gives us a whole and well-rounded vision of the book itself and the story to come. We already know a very important detail about Lyla and we can tell the struggles she's about to affront. Excited for the action! And love the last send-off line, trust no one. Feels like there will be others involved and prepares you to be aware of each character from now on. I really like this. No grammar faults either.
Total Score: (10/10)
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The Fanfiction Genre
"The Mandalorian and the Jedi: Book One of the Mandalorian Series"