So i have imagined lakshman is dead due to shakti spear
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Ram was sitting silently near the ocean holding his brother's body
Ram looked at Lakshman and said
R- how can u do this to me laksh how can u leave me. I cannot live without u laksh
L- ( in very slows voice) bhaiya i don't want to die . I want to see your coronation bhaiya.
( blood was coming out of his mouth while speaking)
R - don't speak laksh u r hurting ur self
I know u will laksh . God cannot be so unfair. He cannot take my laksh he cannot snatch away my soul.
Right laksh???
L- bhaiya pls tell urmila i truly loved he r during the exile . I missed her every second
R- u will tell Herself coward!
(Ram screamed)
Sushen came and sat beside ram
S- shri ram i need to change his bandage its all covered in blood
R - go ahead vaidya raj
(Lakshman screams in pain and starts breathing heavily while sushen was changing the bandage)
L - bhaiya itss hurting a lot I cannot take it anymore
R - calm down saumitra everything will be fine
(Ram started rubbing lakshman hand to relief him from the stress)
L- ( tears in his eyes) bhaiya i know I won't live anymore ....
Bhaiya tell urmila to remarry don't wait for me
R- what are u saying!! 😡😢
L- bhaiya ... Ahh it's getting worse..........
Bhaiya i want u to complete the war .......
( and lakshman blacked out)
R- lakshman!!!
Open ur eyes lakshman
U have never disobeyed me lakshman. It's my order lakshman wake up!
R - sushenn jii what happened to him
S- ( he started diagnosing lakshman)
Raghunandan time is very less
We are losing him hanuman has to come faster otherwise
R- ( started praying) hay Lord mahadev now u can save my brother
Angad - ( yelled ) hanuman!!!!
R- suddenly opened his eyes and thanked mahadev
Sushen quickly took the medicine from hanuman and feeded it to lakshman
Suddenly lakshman eyes opened
R- lakhu are u fine
L- bhaiya i can finally see your coronation u r wearing a crown of stars shining so bright and...........
R- and??
L - ( lakshman again fell to the ground
R- lakshman what happened to u
Laksh open ur eyes Sushen ji can u check him
S- raghunandan he is no more.... He cannot bear the shakti astra and we provided him the medicine late
R - lakshman no u can't leave me u cannot leave me what will ur bhabhi say if u don't wake up. And after returning to ayodhya how will i face ma, shatru and ur mila lakshmanRam sit emotionless and started screaming in pain
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