Hey Guys !!
I seriously don't know what to do now. Not even a single interaction ! No comments , no votes.....
Is this story really bad ? If yes then let me know what changes I can make to make it good.
I'm a first time writer and I'm not sure where and what is going wrong here. I'm trying my level best to make this story good. I guess I've failed in that.
For a first time writer the little things matter a lot. The votes and comments boost their energy. It builds their confidence. It really does. I'm seeing that many of you read but don't vote or comment. It's really making me sad.
I'm really grateful for all the views till now. It really makes me happy but seeing you guys not interacting feels like this is not reaching your heart ! Atleast let me know something. It's request !!
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--- Author's POV ---
Shivika is nervous while coming downstairs. She stopped walking she saw all the family members sitting in hall area from upstairs. Aadarsh noticed this and -
"Shivi , what happened ? Why did you stop ?" he asked with concern.
"I can't do this. All are sitting there only. How will I face them ?" She asked nervously.
"I told you na, it's okay. No one will say anything. Trust me" He said holding her hands.
She just nodded and started walking. They both came downstairs. Gayathri noticed both of them and -
"You guys came , come sit here" she said pointing towards the couch. They both sat down.
"Good morning atte" Shivika said in low voice. Gayathri noticed her uneasiness.
"Good morning Shivika. Did you sleep well ?" She asked with smile.
"Ye-ah" Shivika replied
"Good morning attige" Keerthi, Akshay greeted.
"Good morning" Shivika replied with small smile.
"Now it's time for some fun games. Yesterday you were tired na , that's why we didn't play" Keerthi said with excitement.
"Yess , I want to see this Aadarsh loosing. So Shivika you must win" Mohan said with teasing smile. Aadarsh was shocked at his father's statement.
"What appa" he whinned making Shivika laugh.
"I'm with with Shivika" Gayathri said.
"Me too" ,"me too" , "me too" 3 replies came from Keerthi ,Akshay and Aakash. Shivika was very excited now.
"What ! Nobody is with me ?" Aadarsh asked fully shocked.
"Yeah , you are lone warrior" Aakash teased Aadarsh.
"Fine fine , I'll see you all when time comes" Aadarsh said glaring at all of them.
"Come on , the first game" Keerthi said as she came with a big pot filled with water, milk rose petals and some others things.
"Anna , attige give me your rings. I will drop those in here" Keerthi asked. Both of them gave their engagement rings. She dropped those in the pot and stirred it.
"1, 2, 3 start" Aakash said making them both dip their hands in the pot. All were cheering Shivika with full energy. Shivika was also trying to find the ring but she was always getting some other things. Aadarsh saw how his family supported her. He felt happy from inside.
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