PART 40

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NOTE :-
I have noticed that we almost reached part 40 of this book but we are still stuck in teenage TK. I think, this thing may annoy many readers or many thinks we are going slow.

But. Let me clear a few things, so we don't face any problems in the future.

The book doesn't revolves around the Romance and love only. The book shows the contrast of Emotions, understanding, Relationship, sacrifice, and more.

We couldn't just jump to their adulthood until and unless, we make their bond stronger. I understand, you may think this can happen within 20 to 25 chapters but that's not the point. Chapters aren't the point. The point is feelings.

Taehyung is a quiet girl who doesn't opens up with people and Jungkook is a gentleman who barely reaches out to be free with her. At the beginning you must have noticed their behavior but now it's different. Few moments can't make them strong enough to be free when they will be separated and meet again. This may cause miscommunication and misunderstanding between them. We need to build the pillar then we can reach out for the roof, isn't it?

If you think, showing other characters moments can be removed, then you are wrong. As I have told you, every character has been portrayed by me with their beautiful and unique existence and each one of them is important.
Just because you hate Ara or Love Yuna, we can't ignore Ara. She plays a vital role in the book. Not only her, but every character does.

Plot twist. Just to make the book exciting, I can't give plot twists. Everything has a sequence and we need to follow it. Plot twists will also come but with time.

I assure you, the book will be better enough to enhance your mind if not heart.

Yes. I'm not saying the readers are wrong, just the way of your thinking is wrong. Or else, if we try to find the main negative point then it's me. I wrote the chapters short. If I wrote long chapters, we may have been done with teenage TK till 32 or 33 parts. I apologize for my mistake.

If you want, I can write the long chapters. And I think, it's important or else the book will become very lengthy and boring.

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The soft glow of sunlight filtered through the curtains, cascading a beautiful glow to the room, the young couple lied on the bed, the steady yet calm breathing sound of Jungkook could be heard in the silence, his eyes closed and lips parted slightly, hand gripped his wife's hand firmly yet softly, his face held calmness and Tae lied beside him, their faces away slightly, her eyes stared at him, it held softness and serenity, her fingers gently traced his cheek and jaw

"Phir pata nahi kab milega ye nazara dekhne ko" She whispered, her voice soft and thick with emotions, tears shined into her eyes like a new found crystal, her eyes travelled every inch of his face, she leaned forward and pressed a gentle kiss on his forehead, her grip on their intertwined hands tighten, he hummed in sleep and a faint smile appeared on his lips, she chuckled and pinched his cheeks softly yet affectionately
"Don't know when again I'll get this view to see"

"Good morning" He spoke in his deep hoarse voice, his eyelids slowly opening, their eyes meet and the world seems to get still, surrounding getting blurred, and their heart raised their rhythmic beats, their heart seems to get mixed in each other as they were drown closer with each passing beat, their eyes closed and lips a mere inches away, unknown to themselves they were too close for a kiss but at extact moment, a loud knock on the door made her push him back

A groan left his lips as he lied on his bed keeping his arm on his eyes, his lips twisted into irritation, soft giggles left her lips, her cheeks and heart warmed up, he peaked at her from his arm and a smiled tugged at the corner of his lips, she leaned closer and pressed a kiss on his cheek, a wide smile appeared on his lips before he held her waist and flipped their positions making her lay under him, her eyes widen and hands rested at either side of her head

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