Scores:
D1M, Holland Lennox, 0
Entry: DID NOT HAND IN
Killed: 6 (1 IN ENTRIES, 5 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: None available.
D1F, Elefana Mayhem
DESCEASED.
D2M, Dylan Kirsten
Entry: 10
Killed: 0 (0 IN ENTRIES, 0 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: When I responded to your email, I wrote: "CRY! CRY! CRY!" That's all I did. The first two part were Davery moments, and they just got the ball rolling (I ship it so hard, you don't even want to know). The entry had a lot of...action. If you know what I mean. This entry was your best by far! I got more of a feel for Dylan as person in this sole entry then all of the others. Great job, keep going at it. I HOPE YOUR BRACES HURT!!! –THE WORST WRITER'S GAMES HOST EVAH. Also, hey, you didn't get killed!
D2F, Ashlar Quentin
Entry: 7.5
Killed: 3 (1 IN ENTRIES, 2 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: None available. The entry was turned in after the deadline.
D3M, Judas Corwell
DESCEASED.
D3F, Liliana Lumen
Entry: 11 (+1 for being first to hand in)
Killed: 3 (1 IN ENTRIES, 2 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: I am sorry for Liliana! First Rowan and then Aidan. You really know how to hit a reader in the feels! The entry had just enough action to suffice and there wasn't a change from first person to third like there was last time. So good job with that. I love how you incorporated emotions with the action, which was a very nice touch. If you continue like this, you can guarantee yourself a spot in the Quarter-finals.
D4M, Aidan Dowey
DESCEASED.
D4F, Rowan Reed
DESCEASED.
D5M, Chaff Jackson
DESCEASED.
D5F, Seralia Scarre
Entry: 12 (USED AUTOMATIC 12)
Killed: 0 (0 IN ENTRIES, 0 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: None available.
D6M, Alastor Karnstein
DESCEASED.
D6F, Majory Redrail
Entry: 8
Killed: 3 (1 IN ENTRIES, 2 IN BALLOTS)
Notes: Hmm...certainly not your best entry, but it sufficed. Gazette prefers action, but I (Karla) prefer emotion, but sadly, there was a slight lack of both. Action wise, there could have been more. Like Majory said, her opponent was a child. She should have been an easy kill. For the emotion, I was looking for more remorse. Again, Millie is just a child. There were hardly any spelling mistakes, though, so good job on that!
D7M, Oakley Awl
Entry: 10.5
Killed: 6 (1 IN ENTRIES, 5 IN BALLOTS)
