Since I love you guys so much, I thought I would show u this piece of writing I did in sixth grade, almost exactly 5 years ago. I just found it while going through my stuff in my room ((I'm moving this weekend!!))
Cristisizm is appreciated
((I'm writing it exactly how I had it ok omg))
The Journey to Ella Monkey
By: Savanna Busam
11/16/2010
Once upon a time, in a land far far away, there were two beautiful princesses named Princes Alex and Princess Emily. Across their castle in Ellevland, lived Prince Andrew who loved Princess Alex.
There was only one problem; the princesses didn't think they were pretty enough. They wanted to go see Ella Monkey to have her magic wand make them even prettier. The Evil Sophia the Witch and her evil sidekick Thidy tried to stop them.
Prince Andrew along with the princesses were walking though Ellevland and Sophia the Witch and Thidy sidekick were hiding in the bushes. All of the sudden the terrible two snatches them up and tried to feed them to her pet dragon, :( Fire. The prince pried open the beast's mighty jaws and had a sword and used it to keep the dragon's mouth open. They escaped just before the dragon snapped the sword in half and closed his mouth to eat them.
They slept in a nearby castle and the next day they set off. But the evil witch and her tiny sidekick were not finished with them yet. They tried to shove them into a lava pit. Luckily, they were all wearing fireproof clothing ((how convenient)). They found berried in the woods and ate them for dinner. Of course, they awaited another trap. They got sucked into a portal hole that brought them back to the castle they slept in the previous night. They got started again and finally got to Ella Monkey's Castle. She waved her magic wand at them and them even more beautiful. Since she was prettier, Prince Andrew kissed Princess Alex. ((My ex-internalized misogyny at its finest)).
They had a celebration the next day for their courage and Prince Andrew and Princess Alex got married and had kids. They were Ella and Andrew Jr. Sophia and Thidy sidekick were banished from Ellevland forever because of their foolish behavior and numerous attempts to stop them. And they all lived happily ever after; except for Sophia the witch and Thidy sidekick because they were locked up in a dungeon I'm Wellevland tortured from man eating frogs.
The End.
K .... My dark side came out a bit at the end but ok.
Fun fact; Alex and Emily were my friends at the time ((who later left me for the more popular people:-)))) and Ella was Alex's little sister. Andrew was obviously Alex's crush then. Sophia was a twist on my friend Sophie and basically witch is true now lmao so yeah that's the characters.
So my writing back there had no dialogue. Plus, it made absolutely no sense and there was major plot holes....so basically nothing's changed with my writing except for its gay as fuck !!
Btw up top is my drawing of Ella monkey lmao.
Oh and if u wanted to know, I got 60/60 and my teachers comments were; "the torture at the end is a bit harsh for children- maybe it could be a tickle torture!:)" this isn't a phase Mrs. Day this is who I am
Anyways feel free to laugh @ 11 year old me :-))) I know I did ((actually I cried))
K I love you guys so much and I promise I'm working on shit I'm just so not motivated and I have no idea why !!!! I love you to the moon and back !!!!
Vanny xx
Ps always feel free to inbox me if u need to ok I love u nuggets a lot and I love talking to you!!:-)
