Everything Wrong With Ch 8: #ImSoF*ckingDone.

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gotta love a writer who has no update schedule! They're OBVIOUSLY the best writers known to mankind. OBVIOUSLY.
OBVIOUSLY.
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Ty's P.O.V
THE REFRENCE. IT BURNS. yup I'm sinning the title and the Ty. Deal with it.

I am friends with a bunch of lunatics.
So much respect. So much respect for his friends.

-but he saw there was nothing else he could do but jump in after them, unless he wanted to die via creeper.
NU TY YOU CAN BE YOUR OWN PERSON. JUMPING IN AFTER THEM IS YOUR DECISION. DON'T LET YOUR MEMES BE DREAMS. I mean-
Wait...Who even uses the word Via anymore? Is that even a word still?

He ran in after them and jumped,
What is he running into? Isn't he running off? Do you even Mitch Logic bro?

But while in midair he felt a sharp pain in his right shoulder and left leg.
Seriously. You better not.

and screamed in pain as he looked at his body to see a arrow protruding out of his left foot and right shoulder.
How do you fall at a angle where it's possible for you to get shot in your right and left?
Explain please. Also yes I saw the notchdamn refrence to Ty's foot.
GG Brit.

Two lucky but unfortunate shots.
How are they lucky? Since when is being shot considered lucky?

he tried to pull out the arrows while falling down the abyss (which is alot harder then it sounds,)
Yeah nobody said that it sounded it easy. How is that even possible?Don't you need something to support your weight while you pull it? Is Ty just a mother f*cking wizard?
And on the topic of how is anything possible, WHY ARE THEY STILL FALLING.

Eventually,
Eventually means later on. That means they've been falling for a while still. I swear to god if they wake up in Mianite...

he figured that since he was about to be turned into a human pancake when he hit the bottom,
You have to love the PG-ness!!!

After what seemed like to short a time
Your kidding me right. Right?

-slam against the water, completely knocking the breath out of him, but it was still better then dying.
Actually, with all the blood he's lost and then slamming your face and chest at a alarming speed into a body of water he probably should be dead but once again, we use Mitch Logic.

"Yeah, not so much," Ty struggled to call to the rest of the group.
Even at death, Ty still manages to be sarcastic as hell. Good Job Ty.

-and saw the flame of a torch get lit
What...when did they collect wood or coal? And a furnace? As far as I read we met kay the....yeah you get it. Jason the cliff lover, Adam the sky diver and....yeah pretty much they haven't stopped to collect anything and we are 8 chapters in. *sighs* Oh WAIT I forgot Mitch Levadez is the human torch! Alright I understand. Carrying On.

-stupid skeletons got some lucky shots.
Once again, how is that lucky?

He heard the voices around him disappear, as if someone pressed the mute button.
Kay stop messing with Ty's computer!

Then everything went black.
Really? Are you sure everything didn't go dark dark dark dark dark dark dark dark dark dark-

Sin Count:18
Sentance: This Chapter Is Sponsered By: References.
(-in his left leg and right shoulder-)
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|A/N:|
Dear god it's almost been a month... IM SO SORRY MY WATTPADIANS I CRI ALL DA TIM. Ok so I went to a tournament, I sparred, and guess what? When you fight, there's a chance you might break you hand! (I wore gear, trust me. I just have derped some how and my hand ended up broke.) So now my hands back, and I am too!!! So that's all for now...OH AND ME AND ABRIDGED CHILD MAY BE ABRIDGING A BOOK YOU SHOULD SUGGEST ONE TO HER SHE UPDATES MORE THAN ME AND SHES FUNNY AND SH*T. We are mostly thinking about doing Mianite by _It's_Lee, but we still have to ask and we are still open for suggestions. Thats all! I'll write you later my lovely wattpadians!

~The_Fic_Girl



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