Everything Wrong With Chapter 3: Wake Up Call

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Guys IM NOT DEAD OMG. I have karate tournaments coming up and I had to be training all week so....yeah
NOUGH BOUT ME, to le story!
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-Kay walked to her boyfriends, Ty's, house, annoyed at him for not her meeting at her house,
like they planned
Ugh is she gonna be the whiney annoying girlfriend? Because quite frankily im done with fan fics with whiney annoying girlfriends.

-Annoyed with Ty, she grabbed her keys from her pocket and opened the door.
If you thought he slept late how could he open the door? Why would you knock when you have a key? STOP BEING SUCH A DOUCHE NOTCHDANGIT.

-"Ty are you here?" she yelled again before checking the house. She checked the living room,
kitchen, basement, almost everywhere, but he wasn't anywhere.
Why didn't she check the room first if he was sleeping? Well if she thought he was sleeping? I seriously don't understand this chicks knowledge. And they just introduced her!

-She immediately checked for a pulse. It was still there, fortunately, but wws very faint.
It was almost as if he was in a
DONT YOU F***ING DARE
Coma.
*sighs* Just roll the friggin credits kay. Just go ahead.

Kay stifled a cry as she what she thought to be a low, devious laugh behind her, but when she looked, all she saw was Ty's computer screen flicker to life.
Don't lie Kay we know you have no feelings. Hey, if it makes you feel better, Your boyfriend is down from the Matrix now. How many times will I make this joke? As many times as it takes for me to get over the fact they fell for litteraly 1 chapter....ugh im adding a extra sin because that was just infuriating.

Sin count:6
Sentance: A She-Devil Girlfriend. Who slightly an idiot.
(-Annoyed with Ty, she grabbed her keys and-)

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6 days....no update. Man I feel bad. BUT I've been away doing karate stuffs and I've been planning for a new sin book, I have 2 suggestions so far.
Minecraft in the Morning by YoutubeMyLife (sorry if thats wrong)
Adopted By TeamCrafted by ....uh ill go find out.
Because todays chapter was so short, im doing ch 4 RIGHT NOW. pls dont hurt me. I fan too. just a fan who sins. Anywaaaaaaaaaays,
I'll write you later my lovely Wattpadians!

~The_Fic_Girl

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