Everything Wrong With Chapter 17: Stoopid Secrts

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Sk3tch has cheered ' TO ALL A GOODNIGHT!' On to the game.

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I'M SO SORRY.
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Ty's POV.
A.k.a Drug King A.k.a a.k.a Sky's mom a.k.a a.k.a a.k.a The troll kings prince a-

Ty and the rest of the group all jumped out of their boats and pulled them to shore,-
Oh now you include a time skip?

But Ty had the most trouble doing it.
Has absolutely no one noticed Ty limping and you know...just kinda dying...in the back?

Jason: Sky I think Ty's hurt.
Sky: nah he's just tired.
Ty: *dies*
Sky: told you.

When he jumped out the boat-
Knowing he had a hurt leg? Jeez Ty, what were you thinking?

-and as he pulled it on shore-
Knowing he had a hurt shoulder. I mean he could've easily asked for help and nobody would've accused him of being hurt; but no man hormones and 'he has to be super manly' and what not.

Now a sin off because that's pretty accurate what would've happened.

-not wanting to worry his friends.
Another Pet Peeve of FanFics: The main character almost diying because they 'didn't want to worry their friend.' If he told them there's literally nothing wrong with them stopping to check it out, it'd only drag out their time there. And they couldn't of done anything about it anyways. They'd be like "oh yeah that looks bad. Welp we should go on!"

Yes I know I don't write books yet sin them, yes I know I sound butthurt. But that's kinda my job soooo-

-and it was getting worse every hour,
Ty's gonna die then, right?
Crap.

-and he knew why.
Because Ty is the master of decpetion, obviously.
Even if it's not even the real Ty.
LIKEINDANGARONPAANDENDERONI- I mean...hey have you noticed this beautiful font I'm using? What were we talking about?

-he saw that their arrows were coated in poison-
And how was he able to observe that?

-and they would never make it back to their world.
Actually, knowing that you were hurt and could possibly die would fill them with determination.
...
No regrets.

-he didn't know if the poison would kill him,
Now that I think about it, I'm guessing the poison was some specially enchanted one by Herob*tch because poison doesn't last that long in Minecraft. But poison only takes you down to half a heart. Unless withered. Then Ty should be dead by now.

Either way I'm disappointed in Flashlight Eyes.

-Or how much time he had left,
A couple of chapters, a prequel and a unfinished sequal actually.

-but he didn't want to slow the group down.
So it's okay if the group slows down by I don't know, Jason going sky diving, as long as it's not his fault it's cool cool.

-but he didn't want to slow the group down.
If you die I'm engraving that into your stone and facepalming.

-even if it kills me.
Here lies Ty, a master mind of drugs and deception.
He was a great man, yet fell to SAYING THAT SH*T YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO SAY WHEN YOUR HURT.

Sin Count:19

Sentence: The Sequel To: If I Stay
(-but he didn't want to be the one who slows the group down-)

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{§A/N:§}
"He breaks into children's homes yearly;we must stop him. And if you don't, I'll do it alone. Nick, I will find you.
And I will kill you."

...ON THAT NOTE, MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE! If I just broke your childhood, then that's your fault for being on my side of wattpad. YOU CAN'T HOLD ME ACCOUNTABLE! But seriously, MERRY Christmas Eve. I was wondering if you guys wanted me to sin any one shots for Christmas, cause I feel like I've been leaving you guys second. So if you want me to, let me know.
anywaaaaaays, that's all for now my lovely little elves!
I'll write you all later!

Sk3tch has cheered ' AND GOODNIGHT TO ALL!' Off of the game.

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