*FIRST BOOK/NEW AUTHOR*
Title: Who Has Me?
Author: GeekyBooks2
Genre: Mystery/Thriller/Romance
Status: Completed
Length: 26 chapters medium length.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/134180754-who-has-me-chapter-1
Description:
Gemma starts noticing some odd things. Turns out she has a stalker. She has many problems at home so she stays with someone else, a frenemy.
That someone is Jace and they don't get along very well because Jace is the player of the school, but it is quite noticeable that Jace treats Gemma better then others.
Can Jace save her though?
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Ace's Review:
As the book is completed, I will critique the plot as a whole. The plot itself was almost flawless. The one flaw (which I have already told the author and will keep vague as to not spoil the book to new readers) I found was fixable. The confusion and disruption to the story caused by that one thing would be fixed by editing. The grammar in this book could use some work. The flow of the words isn't as smooth as it should be, but it isn't bad for a book that isn't edited. Overall, I would recommend this book because of the depth of the characters and the attachment the reader finds themselves in to the characters. The ending of this book leaves a bittersweet touch. A final note: this book is VERY intense!
ESTÁS LEYENDO
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