The Commenter ( Jc Caylen Fanfiction)

the day of surprises

Kian's p.o.v
I woke up to Abby sleeping in my bed. I remember the horrific story she told me about nathan and how horribly he treated her. I also remember that today I was going to surprise her with a gift that I knew she wanted. I knew that she has always wanted to meet JC Caylen her mom told me that she was super excited to meet myself but JC just had a little over me. Completely okay considering she is my cousin I just have to help her through the rough times and hope to God she's okay!

I had to wait untill she got up and then I woukd get her out to meet JC!
When 11:00 am came around d i had to wake her up cause she was gonna miss the suprise otherwise! " Abbster wake up" "Abby" she didn't respond "ABBY!!!!!!" I screamed and she woke up panicking saying stuff like what's wrong what's happening i was just sitting there laughing so hard! "Come on get ready it's almost time for your suprise! !!!!!!!!!" I said "OKAY I WILL GO GET READY" She said mimicking my voice when I woke up up.
Ontario
About a half an hour past and Abby came down it already she looks really nice she had some light blue high-waisted shorts on with a tank top that said imma hot top. i laughed and she must have noticed because she looked at me all confused.

A: what?
K: ( laughing hysterically) no-no-nothing
A: tell me what's so funny
K: your tank top 😂😂😂
A: what's wrong with it
K: well 1 it's mine 2 we are twining 😂😂😂
A: COOL WE ARE TWINS NOW LET'S GO!
K: ha ha ha ha ha okay you're gonna love your suprise!

We got into the car and drove off to the beach it was a beautiful day and the sun was shining. Abby had blasted the music in the car and was singing along with good girls by 5sos "you're a really good singer!!" I said over the very loud music " oh um ha ha not really but thanks" she started to blush it was cute the way she blushed i screamed awwwww and she told me to shut up i laughed again.

Abbys p.o.v

We finally reached the beach and we were the only ones here except for 1 other person! It was so nice the waves were crashing up on the beach and i got curious. "Kiki what's my supriseeeee" i whined like a little 5 year old "ha ha come on" he said so I got out of the car and I walked with kian. When we turned the corner i stopped and stood here in shock "kiki you didn't!" I said with my hands over my mouth "ohhhhhhh but I did abster! Go say hi" he said and I walked slowly trying not to look so fan girly as we were walking i was talking to kian quietly "kiki i look like shit i can't meet him now!" I say looking myself over " ab you look 100% fine go say hi" i kept walking and jc waved and ran at kian and tackled him to the ground and they started laughing so I did to because it was really funny to watch! Jc was talking to kian and Jc looked at me and I was confused he tired around and started talking to me " hey I'm Jc :)" he said and I was star struck and didn't say anything "dude is she okay?" I heard JC ask kian " ha ha ha yeah she is fine she is just star struck you're like her biggest inspiration!" Kian explained and I managed to say something " h-hey I'm abby" i said and what Jc said next enraged me " OH THAT ABBY the kian talked about all night last night!" He said i was ready to yell at kian "KIAN!!!" I said in a whiny voice JC just started laughing at my reaction "cute" i heard him say quietly under his breath and I immediately blushed and he just laughed again at my blushing

Jc: so whacha wanna doo guys?
K: i don't Abby what do you want to do?
A: i have never been to the beach till now can we stay here
K+J: Oh my god are you serious!!!
A: yeah didn't think it was that big of a deal...
Jc: one minute

With that JC turned around and put hi feet into the water then ran back over to me and picked me up bridal style and ran back towards the water i screamed and kicked but it was no use Kian even ran after me to try and stop him but it didn't work soon enough JC threw me in the water but i held onto his neck hard enough that he came in with me and we both got soaked by the water.

The rest of the day we hung out splashed in the water and got food cause who doesn't love food? Anyway so kian and i had to go home and JC and I got each others phone numbers and texted all night I was about ready to fall j to a deep sleep when someone opened my door i said come in asuming it was kian but when I saw his eyes i knew it wasn't kian's when i saw the boys angry expression i knew exactly who it was

It was Nathan he came back