naruto the neglected

chapter 1 - the sealing

minato p.o.v

kushina and i were stabbed by one of the kyuubi no kitsune's claws because (in this its not meko and there are 3 children) we tried to save mito(last time it was meko), menma and naruto. i looked over kushina's shoulder and saw that the barrier around us had broken when we were hit. i still have to seal the kyuubi with in mito who is the youngest and looked like a chibi version of kushina with beautiful red hair, violet eyes, a round face and wrapped in a red clothe (kushina isn't wearing the clothe), next to her is menma is the middle child and who i plan to seal the chakra in he has red hair with blond highlights, he has kushina's facial structure, my eyes he is wrapped in a red and yellow clothe and finally naruto who i plan to seal nothing in, naruto who is the oldest of the three and looks like a chibi me but with pale whisker like marks that are bearly noticeable unless you look really close, he has bright yellow hair, ocean blue eyes, my facial structure, seems to be the calmest of them and i wrapped in a yellow clothe. three anbu and lord 3rd ran over to us. just as i was about to start the hand seals hiruzen (lord 3rd finally remember his name!) stopped me "minato live your life to its fullest with your family. i have already seen two great wars and lived along life and know it is my time to pass on i will seal this beast into your children just remember to always care for them and cherish them with in your heart" he started the hand seals i was smiling and crying at the same time "thank you!" i called out as he fell to the ground unmoving.

hiruzen's p.o.v

i smiled as i sealed the beast into the young blond they named naruto. i know they meant it to be mito and menma but i know that naruto is meant for great things "naruto i know pass you my will of fire so you may live a strong and glorious life by protecting this village with my gift to you" i whispered as everything started to turn black. naruto was looking at me and gave me a smile as bright as the sun itself i smiled as well his smile was just contagious i can't help it. then everything went black. but i felt water around me i sat up and looked around "am i dead?" i said to myself i got up and started walking around until i came upon a cage "hello?" i said to the darkness but then i saw the kyuubi no kitsune smiling at me?! "thank you hiruzen for sealing me within this boy or i would have been forced to wipe out your village you see i was being controlled by a masked uchiha" the kitsune said i was shocked the kyuubi no kitsune thanking me? "n-no problem, what do you mean by within this boy? shouldn't i be dead?" i asked curiously "you are not dead, when someone seals a tailed beast inside a body no matter the sealing process they are sealed within the human as well so that they can keep the seal intact until the jinjuriki befriend the beast and release him or her" explained the kitsune "i have two questions, first: do i get to stay her after you become friends with naruto? and secondly: what is your name kyuubi no kitsune is a title given to you?" i asked "yes you are able to stay after i become friend with naruto and my name is kuruma thank you for asking your the first person since the sage of the six paths gave it to me" he started to cry a bit "you truly are a kind creature kuruma" he smiled back at me. we talked until i decided to explore this place i found a bedroom, bathroom, kitchen, games room, a view point to the outside world and a memory bank that was blank. i went back to the games room grabbed a deck of size changing cards and went back to kuruma who looked bored out of his mind "want to play a game of cards?" he nodded and we started playing.

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hay guys as you know this is a rewrite of the original book. i am proud to say this is longer and more detailed then the original. this book will have more things in it, different names, different ages, less time skips, more training scene's, more missions and a whole lot more so this 2.0 of the book now the original first chapter had 400 words this on the other hand has 810 words 

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