naru p.o.v
we were about an hour away from the great nations when there was a yellow flask well thats what sinbad says. since i'm the commander of the ships i have to stay safe. kiya came running in terrified "what is it?" i asked her worried "min...ato" she said out of breath i stood up from behind my dest in alarm "WHAT?!" i yell everyone on my ship heard and that includes dad. i heard "haha sucked in i know where your commander is!" that was dad i hid under my desk and kiya in my cupboard as he burst in, i looked through a hole under my desk to see him narrowing his eyes at my desk. luffy, sinbad, eren, rin and ichigo came in and looked at my desk nervously. dad destroyed the desk and i jumped behind the group that came in "please don't kill me!" i shout ducking at a piece of desk then jumping up from a punch directed at my chin from the floor, 'he still doesn't know its me' i thought and snickered i was behind my broken desk he wasn't facing me, i started clapping "haha almost got me" i said with a grin, he whipped his head to me and his eyes went wide and kiya burst out of the cupboard "I CAME OUT OF THE CUPBOARD!" she yelled and we all tried to side our laughter at the state meant she looked at us with confusion "you came out of the cupboard, does that mean your lesbian?" i said and her face paled "uh ah" she said and silently went back in. when she was back in i burst out laughing, dad tackled me everyone but luffy was surprised "wow going from killing me to hugging me what a change dad" i said with a smile shocking the group excluding luffy "can your father-son moment end soon we'll be at the great nations soon" luffy said shocking dad "luffy when did you get smart?!" dad yelled and luffy grew a tic mark "from when i became pirate king and trained with my dad for a bit" (never happened but did in this book and of course luffy will be pirate king i'm just making it so he already is) he said and dad nodded turning to me "so your the commander?" he asked and i nodded "yes i am" i said "so ino lied when she said she didn't know who the commander is, then ran of dreamily for some reason" he said with a tic mark i laughed as the others left the room "so ino told me you are the rebel leader?" i asked and he nodded grinning "yep looks like leader ship runs in the family" he said laughing a bit then kiya shouted "hey! oh and when can i come out?" we burst out laughing she took that as her Que. to come out she bonked our heads and we anime cried while holding the bumps "WHERE HERE!" i heard from out side and dad lead the ships to a cave that was the entrance to the rebel base. everyone got off and stretched the rebels where beyond happy for the reinforcements but still confused to who the commander was and where their leader was "rebels!" dad yelled and everyone looked at him "i'm pretty sure you know that these people are reinforcements you are right, their commander has many names *snickering from reinforcements* but he is and has from the start been naruto namikaze-uzumaki-uchiha-inuzuka-senju-nara of the five great nations" he said most of the reinforcements looked at me shocked then remembered i stepped in view of the crowd "well i never thought i would be back so soon from my world wide journey" i said while they all looked at me as if i were a ghost then cheered "we have a chance with lord naruto on our side!" shouted someone from the crowd i face palmed.
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naruto the neglected
Fanfictionthis is a rewrite of my book that i and some others think was way too rushed so if you read this then don't bother reading the other. or if you read the other one don't bother reading this. this might be longer and have more detail and extra stuff b...