naru p.o.v
i grew a tic mark as my dad was crouching on the top of the main room "shut the fuck up old man!" i yelled at him and he grew a tic mark "who are you calling old man!" he yelled back and we started to fight on the deck with people chanting "fight, fight, fight" over and over again
3 days later
we finally made it to marinford but we kinda fell out of the sky when entering there was still a couple of hours till the execution would take place. i grabbed buggy and luffy and a couple of others and teleported to the ground i had grabbed the devil fruit eaters so they were happy when the boat landed in a hole in the ice ground. we then started to make our way to the platform to safe ace. (same as canon until know) luffy, ace and mr. 3 fell of the platform and to the ground. ace and luffy made a run for it while i grabbed mr. 3 away from the guys that want to kill him. i was a few meters behind the two when some idiots started talking smack about white beard and ace stopped not knowing i'm behind him i ran into his back sending him flying onto the boat i chucked mr. 3 up after putting a teleporting seal on him and stayed behind no one noticed i ran up to white beard who was some what surprised to see me there "get back to your captain" he said thinking buggy was my captain "sorry but captain luffy has to attend to ace and ace would kill something if you died when could have been saved i was a cell mate of his when in impel down and befriended him" i said shocking him "you were on the 6th floor and straw hat is you captain?" he said we were having a friendly conversation when of group people came up to us "i am dragon heart naruto the straw hats brawler from the great nations" i said taking the group out with a single move. admiral akainu came up to us "you two are going to jail, one because your pirates, two because nine tails here escaped impel down and three your dangerous men" he said but was kicked in the balls by yours truly and sent flying by white beard i burst out laughing at his pained face the ship was already gone.
at the boats nobody p.o.v
everyone there only just noticed the absents of a certain father like captain and demon like friend, most started banging there heads on stuff saying they were idiots while luffy, ace, ino and minato were bowling and mr. 3 was thinking everyone was an idiot he knew about the seal on him "why *sniff* aren't *sniff* you sad?" minato asked looking up from the gapping hole in luffy's chest with ace and to mr. 3 "because naruto put a teleporting seal on me and can get here in a flash with white beard" he said and everyone looked at him "idiots" he said again and went inside the boat they were on while the others tended to the wounded and law took luffy onto his ship.
back to naruto and white beard naru p.o.v
the battle was going well until black beard showed up not noticing me he went straight to white beard while i secretly locked up his men and then stood behind the white beard "i'll send you to the ship when your ready i think i should stay behind to see what goes on next" i whispered to him as black beard said something about amazing them "know" white beard said everyone looked at him confused as i sent him to the ship amazing everyone "and there is your amazing trick!" i said picking up black beards line and ginning evilly at everyone scaring them shitless "what did you do with white beard?!" black beard yelled forgetting who i am "i sent him somewhere" i said "who the fuck are you to steal my prize?!" he yelled again "i'm the person who can beat you black and blue" i grinned "who are you?!" he yelled as marin officers recognised me "you dragon heart naruto of the straw hat crew and from the great nations you have no protection here get him!" yelled one of them but no one budged "whats up?" asked the same guy "you do know that his real name is naruto namikaze-uzumaki-uchiha-inuzuka-senju-nara right? he is a god in the great nations and the great nations is the strongest continent" said some guy and the first person paled so did black beard remembering our encounter at impel down as i wiped out everyone in the army as shanks arrived and picked up luffy's straw hat "i'm here to end this war and to meet someone on the straw hat crew" he said chucking me the hat as he ended the war. "well this is a turn of events" said garp we were in a meeting, it had me, shanks, the admirals, the 7 war lords and Marko from white beards crew who had not made it to the ship on time along with us was garp and the head guy (sorry forgot his name only remember his fleet admiral) sitting around a table i myself am half asleep from how boring this was and being the youngest and have a very high title in the world is meant to be here for who knows what reason probably because off luffy joining the battle so as a representative of the straw hat crew maybe? "yes i quite agree first straw hat shows up, then one of the most powerful men in the world, then black beard, then white beard goes missing and finally red head shows up" said fleet admiral a couple of eyebrows cock up at 'one of the most powerful men' and 'white beard goes missing' at this point i'm trying to escape so i don't reveal anything about why i'm here "hay fleet admiral why is that kid here?" dolformingo asked everyone turns to me "yes why?" a few ask but not boa, garp, akainu or the fleet admiral. i start sweating bullets i had been trying to creep out the door boa and garp stifled laughs "sit down!" the fleet admiral yelled at me "you can't boss me around do you know who i am?!" i yelled back a few people cocked eye brows up at that "you have less authority here kid" shanks said and garp, boa, fleet admiral and myself burst out laughing while akainu just smirked "why are you laughing?!" moria said pissed off at us and shocked at akainu smirking "i'm dragon heart naruto of the straw hat crew or to the great nations naruto namikaze-uzumaki-uchiha-inuzuka-senju-nara a god of shinobi" i said shocking people talk to death "you can't be dragon heart naruto his meant to be in prison!" moria shouted and i grinned evilly at him "want me prove myself?" i said flashing behind him putting a kunai to his neck "n-n-no" he stuttered as hawk eye looked me up and down noticing my big ass sword "whats with the sword?" he asked as i took it off my back revealing it to be dragomoria the most legendary sword in the world his jaw dropped along with a few others "what it was a present from the dragons when i completed my slayer training" i said a a few fainted.
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naruto the neglected
Fanficthis is a rewrite of my book that i and some others think was way too rushed so if you read this then don't bother reading the other. or if you read the other one don't bother reading this. this might be longer and have more detail and extra stuff b...