Naru p.o.v
"Hay look its a wanna be pirate king" i said and he grew a tic mark on his head while i heard snicking from gaurds behind me "now shouldn't you lot be at marine ford for fire fist aces exution?" I said and black beard grinned like a maniac "where here to do some recruiting now move it brat" he said shooting shadows at me but they had no effect because of my nara blood, to say he was shocked would be an understatement of the man in front of me. He kept trying over and over again "why isn't it working!?" He yelled and i smirked and got into a stance for shadow paralysis "shadow strangle jutsu" i said and my shadow extended and when it reached him it grabbed hold of him, i think i might be pissing him off "what power are you using? What devil fruit did you eat!?" He yelled again and i smirked confusing him "i didn't eat a devil fruit, i'm just from the five great nations and one of the strongest there don't let my age fool you" i said and released him and started dragging dead body's of one ship while he fumed "join me!" He yelled and i burst out laughing "no way in hell i already belong to a pirate crew so why join you?" I said after i calmed down, he looked shocked "who's crew?" He asked and i helled up my wanted poster and he read allowed
"dragon heart Naruto
2000000 berry bounty
From the five great nations
Particularly royalty
Straw hat luffy's brawler" he looked back at me and gulped "i would suggest you don't cross paths with my crew in the future when i'm with them" he nodded and went into impel down to do recruiting. A couple of hours later luffy crashed through the front doors i was having a nice nap to so i'm pissed "get a ship quickly!" I heard him shout but my ship was the only one left "straw-boy theres only one here and what about your crew member we haven't seen him since we let him go are you sure his trust worthy?" The guy with purple hair said i grew a tic mark, luffy narrowed his eyes at my ship "he is trust worthy and its odd theres only one ship" he said as i got to deck they heard me and got into fighting stances "really captain even after i got us a ship?" I said and he relaxed and jumped on with the purple haired guy that was know staring at me intensely "keep staring and i'll galge out your eyes" i said and he looked amused "he will do it do you even know who he is?" Luffy asked and the guy shock his head "well nice to meet you i'm naruto" i said and everyone spat out their drinks "WHAT?!" They all yelled "you heard me i'm naruto also known as dragon heart naruto" i said ticed off at them for not believing me "YOU MEAN THE ONE FROM THE GREAT NATIONS?!" yelled a guy with blue hair and a red nose "you heard me right big nose" i said and he got pissed at me "whats wrong bis nose?" i asked to annoy him, he stomped over to me forgetting the previous conversation and tried to punch me but i dodged and upper kicked him in the jaw. "remember the previous conversation dumbass" crocodile said snapping bluebe to his senses as he hit the deck "the name buggy not big nose" he said acting like mito and i sweat dropped "and my name is ivonkof" the purple haired guy said and i nodded and we set off i went missing since i had to go to the control room only to see a guy dressed like the warden heading there i pulled him aside "what are you planning?" i asked and he looked at me "i'm planning to have the guards unpaid the gates so straw boy can get through" he said and i sighed "let me do that i can get us back to the ship after" i said and he looked surprised i henged into the warden and entered the room. 10 minutes later i walked out since they were through, the guy looked at me "how are we getting out know? oh and i'm bonclay a friend of the straw hats so don't mess with me" he said "i'm naruto a member of the straw hat crew the brawler and we are gonna teleport there" i said shocking him as i felt a pull on my three pro-longed kunai jimbe must of thrown it. bon was out of the wardens clothes know so when i teleported us it wasn't awkward "naruto why the hell did you do that?!" luffy shouted "i knew i could get back to the ship no matter what" i replied and shrugged then there was a white and platinum blond flash behind me everyone got into stances while i started sweating bullets i was in prison clothes and then she appears "~naruto~" she sang in a sickly sweat voice everyone then looked at me i heard a bark from shi who was with her, let me tell you never anger someone who trained under my mum and tsunda "y-yes i-ino?" i shuddered as everyone was shocked to see and hear me scared "you better have a reason for going missing for 3 weeks then i find out your in some prison trying to escape with your captain! imagine what i had to do to make sore your dad didn't come barging in!" ino yelled at me then she punched me in the face and i went back flying "why are all the girls dating or married to someone in my family have monster strength" i said sitting up shocking everyone but luffy and ino "not my fault you choose to date me/her" they said as i walked out of the hole "hay thats unfair not my fault you went to train with my mum and tsunda, and luffy seriously you to?" i winned "aw is the little demon like man being a wimp?" dad said
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hay guys thanks for waiting for this to come out and i swear if i have any more assessments i will burn them down and kill the person nearest me at the time meaning I HATE ASSESSMENTS!
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Fanfictionthis is a rewrite of my book that i and some others think was way too rushed so if you read this then don't bother reading the other. or if you read the other one don't bother reading this. this might be longer and have more detail and extra stuff b...
