naru p.o.v
"hi i'm rin nohara nice to meet you naruto and ino" rin said and we shook hands thats when i decided to tell those who had no idea about my relationship with the hokage whet made me hate him so much. by the end of the tale rin, kiya, toku, lyric and ino were destroying stuff in anger against the hokage while me and jiraiya just stood there sweat dropping "someone's coming" me, kiya and toku all said at once since we're uzumaki's. just as we said that 3 akatsuki members came out.
kiya p.o.v
"tobi see's the 2, 3 and 5 tails all at the same time wow, look, look deidara-sempei its three jinjuriki" said the masked one who was starting to annoy me" the masked guy said annoying the crap out of me "look, look, look deidara-sempei 4 jinjuriki" he said again this time i snapped "shut the fuck up you hyperactive shit!" i yelled over lyric and toku's shoulders and right into their ears they stepped back from me as they felt my aura so did the akatsuki members i then look at rin, toku, naruto and lyric "ready to go on a rampage lyric, rin, toku, naruto?" they all smirked and stood beside me. all the akatsuki members were shocked but ready to fight the masked guy was staring at rin "think you can handle four tailed beasts?" i asked shocking the akatsuki but then i clicked my fingers and all four of us turned into our tailed beast mode we grinned and attacked them. coming out on top off the fight we tied them up and started dragging them along side us each jinjuriki dragging a akatsuki. lyric dragging sasori, rin deidara and me stuck with the hyperactive bastered we stopped for the night tied them to three trees while they watched us eat "i think we should feed them we can't have them die of starvation we still need information out of them" i said quietly they nodded at my suggestion rin and naruto went to the masked guy, lyric to sasori and i had the bomber who didn't want to eat i smirked got a large spoon full forced his head to look at me opened his mouth and shoved the food then forced him to chew the other two members weren't wanting to eat ether and were staring deidara in shock and horror as he was forced to eat lyric followed suit with sasori once deidara was done i went over to rin and naruto "whats the problem rin, naru? can't get his mask of" they nodded i cracked my knuckles scaring the man sitting in front of us "kids don't kill him" said jiraiya coming up behind me "i'm just gonna rip that mask of his face and see what he is hiding" the man gulped "uh kiya can't you just see past his mask with your sharingun?" naruto asked shocking the man "oh yea i completely forgot know lets take a look" the other two akatsuki were watching as i activated my and stared a the scared man i gasped and fell back everyone looked at me even the other two akatsuki while i just stared at the man in front of me i heard the others calling out to me but i was too busy looking under the mask the man was looking the side and i can see where he was crushed by the boulders in kakashi's and rin's stories of this man, the man they thought dead, the man that caused them so much pain, the man that gave kakashi his sharingun, this man was obito i got up grabbed him by the collar and started yelling at him "we all thought you were dead! do you know how much pain you caused them?! why didn't you say you were alive!" i had chucked him to the ground tears rolling down my checks "you were so kind when you were still in the leaf (the whole obito dying happened a year after kiya was born she was like a prodigy so she knew the same as a 10 year old and has photogragic memory), what happened to change you so much that you would join the akatsuki?!" everyone was looking at us the akatsuki members were shocked i was punching him across the face his mask slowly breaking the guys were know trying to pull me away i kicked him across the face "WHY OBITO!?" the mask broke and there on the ground was a crying obito clutching the right side of his face crying rin was frozen and let me go i crawled over to him "why did you do it?" i asked him and rin know on the other side of him "i thought i had been betrayed by kakashi he had said he would protect rin and i thought he had lied to me because i saw him stab rin i trained and trained and adventurly joined the akatsuki to get my revenge" he sobbed out "but how? they saw you die" i pointed rin across from me "after all the rocks had fallen onto me the floor gave way and collapsed i don't know how or why but madara uchiha saved me and looked after my wounds he gave me a new arm and leg so i could train, he gave me a roof over my head, food to eat and somewhere to sleep. i don't know how he was alive but he was very, very old looking and i could tell he would die soon which he did. the day he passed on was the day i went back above the surface" he said i then remembered a masked man attacked her and minato just after naruto and meko were born i knew it was him "your the one that let the nine tails out 16 years ago?!" this caught the others attention and rin screamed "WHAT?!" "its true it was me" he said pushing himself up from the ground i tied back to the tree and told everyone to go get some sleep i glanced at obito who was know being talked to by the other two akatsuki members. i left and went to bed.
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Fanfictionthis is a rewrite of my book that i and some others think was way too rushed so if you read this then don't bother reading the other. or if you read the other one don't bother reading this. this might be longer and have more detail and extra stuff b...
