READER COMMENTS, SUMMARY, DISCLAIMER

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Wattpad reader comments:

@AmandaEaves Congratulations on a job well done, I came across this story several times before I actually decided to read it. I thought it was going to be just like the EL James version, I should have known it would be good. If I would have given it a closer look and realized who wrote it. Truly enjoyed it and am so excited to read what you do FSD.

@linzbnl17 I love your interpretation! Xox

@Jerrie1121 Enjoying your interpretation

@mariahoward2222 I'm speechless that was a awesome chapter you capture it perfectly you can feel the hurt in Christian pain in your words I can't wait for the next chapter you doing great thanks for sharing the story

@KrisaPaxson This chapter has me teary eyed😢

@diamanteazul4 [Christian] Stop listening to Elena!

@AshleyBennett112 When's the next book coming??!! I need to read!!!

@dalebella This was great looking forward to the next book 👍

@Leahv2 I really hope the next book is up soon...ish 😄

Summary:

Why do I loathe surprises? I had no control over who my biological parents were or where I spent the first years of my life. Although removed from my mother's lifeless arms then adopted by perfect all American parents, nightmares of an unpredictable, unstable life with my late mother haunts me.

I'm a twenty seven year old multi-billionaire who keeps a tight rein of my business and personal life. I plan every hour of every day until Miss Anastasia Steele stumbles into my life.

Can Miss Steele look past my success in business, clean, controlled facade and the wounded beast beneath the ten thousand dollar grey suit; or will my alternative lifestyle, complicated relationships and traumatic past overwhelm her? Will she give up on my darkness, like every woman in my life or will she be the only ONE that stays?

Welcome to my exclusive world, where nothing is black or white, its Fifty Shades of Grey...

ADULT CONTENT WARNING: TABOO RETELLING|DANGEROUSLY EROTIC | GUILTY PLEASURE|   | POSSIBLE TRIGGERS | VIOLENCE |MAY OFFEND |YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED|

ADULT CONTENT WARNING: TABOO RETELLING|DANGEROUSLY EROTIC | GUILTY PLEASURE|   | POSSIBLE TRIGGERS | VIOLENCE |MAY OFFEND |YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED|

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Disclaimer:

Whilst working on the Jamie Dornan and Dakota Johnson fanfic  #LoveScenes www.wattpad.com/story/34772766 came across a retelling of FSoG from Christian's PoV by GEGriffin. This is a work of fan fiction that draws upon characters from Fifty Shades of Grey by EL James. Names, characters, places, and incidents are used fictitiously. The story contains fictitious characters, places and circumstances. Any resemblance to actual person(s), living or dead, business establishments, events, or locales is entirely coincidental.

There's no claim to know celebrities featured in this story nor is there a claim of ownership over the characters or world of Fifty Shades. This story is neither purported nor believed to be part of the Fifty Shades franchise. It is for entertainment only and not part of the official story line. The timeline, dialogue and events in this fictional account is purposely different from the original. There is no financial reward from this story that is a very humble homage from a massive fan.

A/N This multimedia fanfic opens with Christian at Elena Lincoln's house, the antagonist and minor character from Ana's perspective

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A/N This multimedia fanfic opens with Christian at Elena Lincoln's house, the antagonist and minor character from Ana's perspective. This retelling has new fictional characters some based on real people like Mark Zuckerberg and others like members of Elena's household are original fictional characters.

Although this is predominantly a sizzling romance between Christian and Ana, you may get insight into Christian's life before Ana. In the original story, he admitted to many short liaisons, being in the 'club' scene and five long term relationships, the longest being with Elena Lincoln. It is because of this role that Elena will have more than one scene in this retelling.

In 'FSoG' Christian described Elena to Ana as someone who saved him from the destructive path and loved him in a way he found acceptable. Christian told Ana, he talked to Elena about 'life, the universe, business', that he confides in her about his 'perfect' family and budding relationship with Ana. He said, "We can discuss anything...I have no sexual or romantic interest in her [Elena] whatsoever. She's a dear, valued friend and a business partner. That's all. We have a past, a shared history, which was monumentally beneficial for me, though it fucked up her marriage – but that side of our relationship is over."

This re-imagining will try to bring scenes from Christian's time with mother, Ella, the Grey family and previous significant relationships, through flash backs, dreams and dialogue.

Chapters with the Christian x Ana interview (Part 1 to 4) and hardware store scenes should be added over the next couple of weeks or months. The rest of the first book up to Chapter 32 is currently unedited and is due to be rewritten over the next few months.

If you prefer fanfics true to the original narrative, there are many amazing stories in the FSoG reading list, on this profile.

It takes your vote and comments for this story to be ranked on wattpad. If you enjoyed reading this chapter, please share it with your friends, vote, comment, review etc...Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this chapter. Love y'all!

Want to keep informed of updates as they happen, add #Grey to your library. If interested in Jamie Dornan & Dakota Johnson erotic fan fiction try #LoveScenes. If erotic dark thrilling serial killer #PaulSpector is more to your taste, try #TheFallEroticOneShots. Thanks AS x

Content Warning: The fan fiction you are reading describes adult, liberal, unconventional relationships. The characters, their personalities, occupations, relationships and events in this story are not always consistent with the original stories 'Fifty Shades of Grey' or 'Grey'. Hopefully they reflect the complexities and moral ambiguities of the original. Billed as erotica with unconventional relationships accessible to a mature audience, this story develops through consensual BDSM themed sexual encounters.

If you do not want to access a multimedia erotic romance that involves extra marital relationships, same sex attraction, ménage à trios, triggers, mental health issues, flash backs of child abuse or descriptions of sexual conduct, please stop reading now.

***This story is under construction, it has not been edited and content could change***

October, 16, 2016

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