The Blood of Olympus Fanfiction [Editing]

Chapter 1: Percy

A/N this might be really good, or it might be really bad. Im sorry if theres a lot of spelling mistakes, so yea... um please comment advice, thing to improve, etc, etc. Not too mean though, cuz this is my first try. so, enjoy. ps if i take long to post its cuz i am rather busy and in 2 weeks time im going on holiday so um enjoy!

Percy POV

As Percy sat on the deck with Annabeth next to him, Percy thought about Tarturas, Bob, and Damneson. He was still feeling guilty about leaving them.

"You okay, seaweed brain?" Annabeth asked.

"Just thinking..."

We had a weirdly nice silent pause, which was interrupted by Leo calling a meeting in the mess hall. I kissed Annabeth and followed her to the mess hall.

While Leo was talking about sailing to Athens, how we were going to get there, and depressing stuff that my ADHD brain coud not focus on, I looked at Annabeth. Her beautiful grey eyes seemed distant, like she was imagining another world, no monsters, no war, no Gaea, no evil. But they also held some kind of sadness, like she was remebering all the bad things in her life, like Tarturas, her mother and, well, the war of course.

When Leo dissmissed them, Jason asked Percy if he could talk to him. Percy didn't see why not, so he followed him to his room. Annabeth gave me a puzzled look, so I mouthed to her be back in a sec. She nodded so I caught up with Jason and kept walking. When I looked at him he seemed to look pained, which was odd. 

We arrived in a very neat room painted a colour of sky blue. Jason gestured for him to sit down, so he sat.

"What has happened to you, Percy? You've changed since Tartarus. You can talk to us, you know."  he said.

Perc thought it was sweet of him to ask me that, since they'd never really been friends, but Tartuas was still a touchy subject.

" I-I dont know, just something that happened there.'

'What was it, Percy?" he asked. Percy wasn't ready to tell anyone about our experiance in Tartarus, even our friends, so I simply said, "Please. Dont ask."
He said "Alright, just dont dont stress too much, we'll be here for you, kay?

'Okay. But, thanks for being there.'

Jason grinned. 'Anytime, bro.'

So how was that? Plz comment ur opinion  and sorry for first-chapter-crappyness but yeah for now peace out people! :P