Experiment on Rhyming

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I tried to rhyme... not quite sure if it is good or not, so please leave a few comments on what I could do to make it better. Thank you!☺️

My dear, my love, you stand so small, but you are the leader that leads us all.

Our warrior, our hero, pick up your weapon, teach those who harm you a powerful lesson.

My healer, my daughter, don't frown all night, please tell me if something is not right.

Our savior, our hope, please don't cry, those stories are stories, they are only lies.

My beauty, my darling, you aren't weak, those who harm you, are the ravenous beasts.

My love, my life, my day, my night, you are a strong girl, don't hide in fright. Sleep well, sleep tight. The nightmares won't bite for my beauty, my warrior, I'll see you at daylight.

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