Green-Sleeves

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Sometimes the best of us lies under barkstirred by the blackbird's tongue in spiral wynde;out from a bitter theater shrink mindto a thinness, bright collar round the dark

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Sometimes the best of us lies under bark
stirred by the blackbird's tongue in spiral wynde;
out from a bitter theater shrink mind
to a thinness, bright collar round the dark.

Sometimes true piquancy lies near the rind;
the center time's calligraphy, fate's mark -
fractal corridors of the seasons' ark
conducting buds that shall not open blind.

Sometimes it seems our very best selves are
the outward facing, being-commingled kind;
we're lost alone deep plunging to dark star
until our Goldilocks orbital find.

Let xylem and phloem so vegetate;
quiet sleeves the eloquent blossoms state.


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The 'life' of a woody plant is just underneath the bark. The center is a 'dead' structure which occupies the territory and on which the life is supported.
The 'Goldilocks zone' is a zone around a star where the level of radiation from the star  is 'just right' for life. I am aware that 'orbital' is used for electrons round atoms rather than planets round stars ;) - that's intentional too.
The poem is a hybrid sonnet - English, essentially, due to the final couplet, but with some Italianate features and quite tight - with five different rhymes instead of seven.

Pics : wood cut picture of tree ring and plant cell (lime tree).

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