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Where river ripples brown,cannot stopper a wry grin:silently sliding down,current ruches up its skin

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Where river ripples brown,
cannot stopper a wry grin:
silently sliding down,
current ruches up its skin.
In dead reed wilderness
rain-tumbled, sun-dried, wind-cracked
at the end of winter's act
new dark-green spears express.

Wild black and amber bees
are sharp-seen or widely heard -
when disembodied these
passes fuss us till we're stirred.
Searching classical laws
of (Where?) the locally real,
in entanglement surreal,
a sting might give us pause.

Though they buzz the green base
where nettles fettle up, fill -
of spring flowers no trace,
no country of daffodil;
but heavy bodies lift
to see white tendernesses
that prinking breeze caresses
adorn black spikes in drift.

Sweetness easing wonder
that we had but dreamed we lived
all winter (one cylinder)
lost ships cold waters sieved
each mind tight as a drum
now blossom breathe, ghost laid -
kind land has not betrayed
but home to harbor come.

The chaffinch sings out clear,
willow warblers fanfare
joining the robin's year,
workload to ease and share.
New leaves so succulent
we wonder what's edible
for salads incredible -
half jest, half mad intent.

And levering back up hill
leaving the river, sated,
of blossom breathe more still;
top path's blackthorn gated.
Late-March Lady lets in spring,
our legs to speed not slow,
as from these precincts we go,
spring-drugged, walk-sedated.

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This runs to a regular form. The syllable count for the lines of each stanza is 6,7,6,7,6,7,7,6 and the rhyme scheme is a,b,a,b,c,d,d,c. This one is more 'after the manner' than specifically based on one Donne form.

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