Tris P.O.V.
After I get all ready, which takes FOREVER, trust me, I stand outside my door and wait for Tobias to come and get me for our date. He promised he would be here by 7:00. I look at my watch that I kept from my time in Abnegation. It reads 6:56. I hope he gets here, I think to myself.
And just as I do, I see him walking up to me in awe. "Whew," I hear him say. "I don't think I'm dressed up enough to take you out." He threw me a wink.
I wink back and take hold of his hand as we head down to the pit.
"So, what are you going to order tonight, Miss Prior?" Asks Tobias. What is up with him and being classy tonight?
"Why, I don't know what tis on thy menu, my good sir," I say in my best fake accent. Legend has it, people long ago used to talk like that normally. Weird.
"Well, let us take a glance!"
As we stare at the menu, I wonder why he took me here. Maybe because... No, it can't be. Actually, it could be. Could he be proposing to me tonight? OMG I. CAN'T. WAIT! I am so excited!
When the hostess seats us, I say to Tobias, "Hey."
"Hey," he replies.
"Why did you take me here tonight?" I ask innocently. This is it!
"Because I have something special for you tonight." He pulls out a small box. Eeeek!
"It's a necklace! It has a heart with the words, "I Will Love You Fourever" on them. And it says "4 + 6" on the back. Do you like it?"
Oh. My. God. He didn't ask me to marry him. He didn't ask me to marry him. He didn't ask me to marry him. He didn't ask me...
I keep mulling that over in my head and manage a, "I love it!" out of my mouth. I hug him and say, "Thank you so much!" I take a look at the back. "Awww, you shouldn't have!"
He blushes and we stare right into each other's eyes as the waitress brings us our food.
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How was that? So my story is getting kind of long, and I wanted your input on something. So I have been told that I should end this story soon and start a sequel, but I didn't think that would be good because I wouldn't get as much credit for my reads (this sounds really conceited of me, but I'm sorry!) and yeah. So please comment if you think I should either stop this story and make a sequel, stop this story and don't make a sequel, or keep continuing writing on this story. Thanks so much!
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